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My Sunday Hello everyone, today I write about my Sunday. I’m a student at high school. I study everyday from Monday to Saturday. I very busy with my subjects everyday. And Sunday is my holiday. In Sunday, I go to bed very late and I wake up very late in the morning too. Next I can go to visit my grandma or stay at home to play together with my family and neighbor or sometimes is friends. I feel very happy in the Sunday because I don’t have any Saturday. After the breakfast, I go to play with my neighbor. And in the lunch time, I eat my lunch and watching Tv after lunch and I have a fast asleep. In the afternoon, I prepare the lesson for the next week. And I go to play with my friends. After dinner, I study once more time. After it I play video games from 9pm to 10:30 pm in the evening Sunday. I really love my Sunday. Thank you very much for read my post and fix it everyday. Thank you very much. Goodbye and good night everyone.

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My Sunday

Hello everyone, today I'm writing about my Sunday. I’m a student at high school and I study everyday from Monday to Saturday. I'm very busy with my subjects everyday but Sunday is my holiday. On Sunday [maybe: 'The night before'], I go to bed very late and I wake up very late in the morning too. Next, I can go to visit my grandma or stay at home to play together with my family and neighbour or sometimes my friends. I feel very happy on Sunday's because I don’t have a Saturday. After the breakfast, I go to play with my neighbour. And at lunch time, I eat my lunch and watch TV after lunch and then I have a quick asleep. In the afternoon, I prepare for next week's lessons, then I go to play with my friends. After dinner, I study one more time. After that I play video games from 9pm to 10:30 pm in the evening Sunday. I really love my Sunday. Thank you very much for reading my posts and fixing them everyday. Thank you very much. Goodbye and good night everyone.
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My Sunday

Hello everyone, today I write about my Sunday. I’m a student (in) at high school. I study (every day) everyday from Monday to Saturday. I (am) very busy with my subjects (every day) everyday. And Sunday is my holiday. (On) In Sunday, I go to bed very late and I wake up very late in the morning too. Next I can go to visit my grandma or stay at home to play together with my family and neighbor or sometimes (with) is friends. I feel very happy (one) in the Sunday because I don’t have (a) any Saturday. After the breakfast, I go to play with my neighbor. And (at) in the lunch time, I eat my lunch and (watch) watching Tv. (After lunch I fall) after lunch and I have a fast asleep. In the afternoon, I prepare the lesson for the next week. (Then) And I go to play with my friends. After dinner, I study once more (OR "I study agian) time. After (that) it I play video games from 9pm to 10:30 pm in the evening Sunday. I really love my Sunday. Thank you very much for read my post and fix it everyday. Thank you very much. Goodbye and good night everyone.

Well done! You sound like you have a very busy life :)

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