Getting sick
Last Saturday, I think that l may ate some dirty food, so I’ve got diarrhoea. I’ve got the terrible pain in my stomach and felt queasy. I went to a clinic and the doctor told me that I could only drink fluids and I couldn’t eat any heavy meal. I took the pills in the Chemist’s . When I slept, the pain let me in half asleep and half awake. I went to the bathroom all night. It’s a painful experience!
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Getting sick
Last Saturday, I think that l may ate have eaten some dirty contaminated food, so I’ve I got diarrhoea. I’ve got the I had a terrible pain in my stomach and felt queasy. I went to a clinic and the doctor told me that I could only drink fluids and I couldn’t eat any heavy meals. I took the pills in the Chemist’s . When I slept, the pain let kept (OR left) me in half asleep and half awake. I went to the bathroom all night. It’s It was a painful experience!
A little lighter edit than Dylan, just an alternative viewpoint for you to see.
The usual word describing the cause of food poisoning would be "contaminated". "Underprepared" would be one way that food could be contaminated. (Do I sound like a microbiologist? Oops, sorry.) And "dirty" food could be another, so your original word was not wrong.
The main changes that I have made are to do with the verbs - usually the tense, or the auxiliary verb.
If you have any questions, just ask.
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Getting sick
Last Saturday, I think l may have ate some underprepared food and got diarrhea. I had this terrible pain in my stomach and felt queasy. I went to the clinic and the doctor told me I could only drink fluids and I couldn’t eat any heavy (or large) meals. I was prescribed medication and picked it up from the pharmacy . When I (finally) feel asleep, the pain kept me awake and I got zero sleep. I had to the bathroom all night. It was a painful experience!
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Getting sick
Last Saturday, I think that l may ate some dirty food, so I’ve got diarrhoea. I’ve got the terrible pain in my stomach and felt queasy. I went to a clinic and the doctor told me that I could only drink fluids and I couldn’t eat any heavy meal. I took the pills in the Chemist’s . When I slept, the pain let me in half asleep and half awake. I went to the bathroom all night. It’s a painful experience!
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