... about a place important for me
There are many places I like and it's a bit difficult to choose one that important, but I think there is one place here, in Moscow Khodynskoye Field, which is located in the north of the city.
It has extraordinary, even dramatic history, although my memories about this place are really happy.
First historical notes about this place are dated by 1389, and later it used for large celebrations. During one of such celebration in 1834 a tragedy happened there and more than 1 thousand people died...
But in 2012 there was .. just a large and almost empty area and a driving school, specialyzed on extreme driving! I was learning how to drive, but my school couldn't provide me needed level, so I decided to go there.. I started from usual driving and after passing my driving licence exams I tryed extreme driving and it was amazing!
Several years later city authorities decided to use this huge area for a big project. So, now there are a big and a very beautiful park and a big moll there. And no driving school... But to say the truth it's important for many people - to have a good park where they can go with children and a moll for shopping and rest.
I go there often, especially I like to take a very early morning walks in the summer.. But when I look at the office buildings near Khodynka I remember some locations from "Fast and furious" (they are really similar) and my driving experience.
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... about a place important for me
There are many places I like and it's a bit difficult to choose one *as the most* important, but I think there is one place here, in Moscow Khodynskoye Field, which is located in the north of the city.
It has *an* extraordinary, even dramatic history, although my memories about this place are really happy.
*The* first historical notes about this place are dated *from* 1389, and later it *was* used for large celebrations. During one of such celebration in 1834 a tragedy happened there and more than 1 thousand people died...
Several years later city authorities decided to use this huge area for a big project. So, now there *is* a big and a very beautiful park and a big *mall* there. And no driving school... But to *tell* the truth, for many people it's important - to have a good park where they can go with children and a *mall* for shopping and *resting*.
I go there often, I especially like to take a very early morning *walk* in the summer.. But when I look at the office buildings near Khodynka I *am reminded of* some locations from "Fast and furious" (they are really similar) and my driving experience.
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... about a place important for me
There are many places I like and it's a bit difficult to choose one that is important to me, but I think there is one place here, in Moscow, The Khodynskoye Field, which is located in the north of the city.
It (The Khodynskoye Field) has an extraordinary, or even dramatic history, although my memories about this place are really happy ones (or you could say are really positive).
The first historical notes about The Khodynskoye Field are dated by as far back as 1389, and later it was used for large celebrations. During one of such celebration in 1834, a tragedy happened there and more than 1 one thousand people died...
But in 2012 there was... (3 full stops for ellipsis) just a large and almost empty area, and a driving school that was specialyzed specialised (American spelling with a Z, British has S.) on in extreme driving! I was learning how to drive, but my school couldn't provide teach me the needed level skills, so I decided to go there... I started from with usual driving and after passing my driving licence exams I tryed tried extreme driving - and it was amazing!
Several years later city authorities decided to use this huge area for a big project. So, Now, there are is a big and a very beautiful park and a big moll mall there, and no driving school... But to say the truth it's important for many people to have a good park where they can go with children and a moll mall for shopping and rest more.
I go there often - I especially especially I like to take a very early morning walks in the summer.. But when I look at the office buildings near Khodynka, I remember some locations from "Fast and furious" (they are really similar) and my driving experience.
Very good writing overall. I understood everything you were trying to say. Well done!
- Kyle
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Thank you very much for corrections!
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This is such an interesting and well written story! Thanks for sharing :)
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