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Opinion Writing Practice I don’t agree with people who believe newspaper is the core channel to obtain information. However, I insist that convenient Internet is the first choice for the majority. There are three reasons to bolster my opinion. First, the Internet is more user-friendly than the old-fashioned newspaper. People is able to read or browse millions entries at mainstream mobile phone applications anytime and anywhere. They can pinpoint the news that they are interested by using filter function. Second, getting information online is way much cheaper than buying newspaper everyday. People could be well informed without costing any cent. On the contrary, perhaps people have to get on the subway and run into a newsstand to wait to get a latest newspaper if they did not equipped with Internet access. Third, the online news is easier to store. People can save their favorite articles by clicking copy-and-paste without the concern of losing them as long as keep their phone or laptop as safe as possible. After reading the news, people could feel free to do something else. They do not need to organize, clean up and recycle the physical paper. Reading news online is efficient, low cost and good to environment. Besides the three reasons I listed above, actually, the pros of using Internet to get information are countless. To reiterate my opinion, the tendency of replacing newspaper by Internet news is inevitable.

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Hi, re did your essay for a smoother reading. I am not a tutor or a teacher, and it would be good to have the below reviewed by someone else. I do not agree with people who believe newspapers are the core medium to obtain information. However, I do believe the Internet is the first choice in obtaining the news for most people because of the convenience involved. These are my three reasons to bolster my opinion. First, the Internet is user-friendly than the old-fashioned newspaper. People can read or browse millions of entries on various mainstream mobile phone applications anytime and anywhere. They can pinpoint which news article they are interested in by using a filter function. Second, getting the news online is much cheaper than buying a newspaper every day and people can be well informed for free. On the contrary, if people do not have internet access, then there is no choice but to buy the newspaper. However, technology is improving, and internet access is becoming more accessible everywhere. Third, online news is easier to store as people can save their favorite articles by clicking copy-and-paste to save. There is little concern of losing the news articles if they keep their phone or laptop safe. After reading the news articles, people are free to do something else. They do not need to organize, clean up and recycle the actual newspaper. Reading the news online is efficient, low cost and good for the environment. In addition, the pros of using the Internet to get the news are countless. To reiterate my opinion, the tendency of replacing newspaper via internet news is inevitable.

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