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Hello friends, I would be so gratefull if anyone could correct it. People work because they need money. What are some other reasons that people work? Most of people in the world work for money and they want to make a good living. Some people dont work just for money and they excited in working because they had a dream in a special job when they are childhood and now they get that job so enjoy working in it. accationaly when people start to work they feel useful in their society and it is make them to motivate for continue to work. fo instance a doctor help to save people' life. and it is of great appreatation and praise. where people need them in life, also useful which is the main incentive of going on.

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Hello friends, I would be so grateful if anyone could correct it.

People work because they need money. What are some other reasons that people work?
Most of the people in the world work for money and they want to make a better life. Besides this, some people don't work just for money as they are excited in working because they had a dream of a special job when they had been in childhood and now they get that enjoyable job. When people work then they feel respect for themself in society and it makes them motivated to work continuously. For example, a doctor helps to save people's lives that is great appreciation. Where people need work in life, it is also useful as the main incentive of going on throughout life there.
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Hello friends, I would be so gratefull if anyone could correct it.

People work because they need money. What are the some other reasons for that people work?
Most of people in the world work for money and they want to make a good living. Some people don't work just for money and they get excitement in working because they had a dream to be in a special job in their childhood and now they get job so they enjoy working in it. Occasionally when people start to work they feel valuable in their society and it gives them motivatation for continue to work. For instance a doctor help to save people's life and it is great appreciation and praise for him. where people need them in life, It is the main motive of going on.
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Hello friends, I would be so gratefull if anyone could correct it.

People work because they need money. What are some other reasons that why people work?
Most of people in the world work for money and because they want to make a good living. Some people don't work just for money and they excited in get excited about working because they had a dream in a special job when they are childhood and now they get that job so enjoy working in it now have a job they dreamed of having since childhood. accationaly Occasionally, when people start to work they feel useful in to their society and it is make them to motivates them for to continue to work. fo For instance, a doctor helps to save people's life lives, and it is of great appreatation and praise. where people need them in life, also useful which is the main incentive of going on, which earns great appreciation and praise. People need them, and they are useful, which is their main incentive to continue on.

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Hi Yalda, سلام و رحمت و نعمت بر شما باد Try this. ---------------------- People work because they need money. What are some other reasons that people work? Most people in the world work for money, and they want to make a good living. Some people, however, don't work just for money. They are excited to work because they had a childhood dream, and now they have that job so enjoy it. When people work, they feel useful to society, and this motivates them to continue to work. For instance, a doctor helps save lives, and this is greatly appreciated and praised. The main incentive for continuing to work is often knowing that you are needed and useful. ---------------------- -Nile

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