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Human Rights or Irresponsibility? part 8 Understandably, the western governments try to reach a balance by giving people enough freedom and privacy, however, people’s ignorance and selfishness are making this battle against coronavirus impossible to win and it will finally hurt themselves. Freedom and personal privacy have been valued as a symbol of a highly developed civilization. However, when we look back at this period of history after decades or in the eyes of our future generations, it is clear that we are not as civilized as we thought, but a bunch of selfish, barbarous and indifferent animals, who showed no respect to life, and would risk taking away other people’s lives just to have some fun of their own. Freedom and privacy are not as important as responsibility and life. We have to admit that humans are not fully different from their ancient ancestors. The governments and lawmakers should take control at this special time. It was already late, but we don’t want to see more people dying because of this. Now it’s time.

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Human Rights or Irresponsibility? Part 8

Understandably, the western governments try to reach a balance by giving people enough freedom and privacy however, people’s ignorance and selfishness are making this battle against coronavirus impossible to win and it will finally hurt themselves.
Freedom and personal privacy have always been valued as a symbol of a highly developed civilization. However, when we look back at this period of history after decades or in the eyes of our future generations, it is clear that we are not as civilized as we once thought.But a bunch of selfish, barbarous barbaric and indifferent animals, who showed no respect to life, and would risk taking away other people’s lives just to have some fun of their own. Freedom and privacy are not as important as responsibility and life. We have to admit that humans are not fully different from their ancient ancestors. The governments and lawmakers should take control at this special time. It's was already late already , but we don’t want to see more people dying because of this. Now it’s time.
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