English writing practice (26 April) 1. This young couple just married last month, and they are not hurry to procreate. 2. In Chinese culture, getting marry and having offspring is important to people.

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English writing practice (26 April) 1. This young couple just married last month, and they are not hurry to procreate. 2. In Chinese culture, getting marry and having offspring is important to people. 3. They tried to reproduce offspring hard for several years but failed. 4. He has profound knowledge of history. 5. It's ironic that Romanian yogurt is not famous in the world, since its high quality and yummy taste. My English writing practice today. Thanks for your kind help.

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English writing practice (26 April)

1. This young couple just got married last month, and they are not in a hurry to procreate.**

**"procreate" isn't wrong, but it feels very formal here. It would be more natural to say "to have kids."

2. In Chinese culture, getting married and having children is important to people.

**"Offspring" isn't wrong here, but "children" sounds more natural.

3. They tried hard to produce offspring for several years but failed.

**The word "reproduce" already means to have children, so you could say "reproduce" OR "produce offspring." Both sound formal.

4. He has a profound knowledge of history.

**"understanding" would work better than "knowledge" in this sentence when paired with "profound." We usually think of understanding as being deep or shallow, and knowledge as being a lot or a little.

5. It's ironic that Romanian yogurt is not world-famous, since it's of a high quality and tastes great.

**You could still use "yummy" here, but yummy sounds very casual.

My English writing practice today.

Thanks for your kind help.

I like your sentences! :)

English writing practice (26 April)

1. This young couple just married last month, and they are not in a hurry (or "not hurrying") to procreate.

2. In Chinese culture, getting married and having offspring is important.

3. They tried hard to have children for several years but failed.

4. He has a profound knowledge of history.

5. It's ironic that Romanian yogurt is not famous throughout the world, since it is high quality and tastes yummy.

My English writing practice today.

Thanks for your kind help.

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