Could you check my poems? are they gramatically correct?

You gave me a hope

That filled my heart with joy

It’s a pity that it only lasted for a short time.

It’s snowing darling

Snowflakes tuck the old pine tree

Her soul dances in the light of day

**I'm not sure what you mean by "tuck" in this poem. You "tuck" in a child under a blanket, to keep the child warm. I don't know how the snowflakes could "tuck" the tree. Do you mean a word describing an action such as to cover, to decorate, to weigh down...?

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Could you check my poems? are they gramatically correct?

You gave me a hope

That filled my heart with joy

It’s a pity that only for a short time.

It’s snowing darling

Snowflakes tuck the old pine tree

Her soul dances in the light of day

Valid English sentence using tucked -tucked up out of the X.

"Come in it's freezing out there take your coats off sit yourself down by the fire and tuck yourself up out of the cold wind"

Could you check my poems? are they gramatically correct?

You gave me a hope

That filled my heart with joy

It’s a pity that only for a short time.

It’s snowing darling

Snowflakes tuck the old pine tree

Her soul dances in the light of day

you may be looking for the phrase to be tucked up [against something] under something.

Snowflakes were tucked [up] against the old pine tree.

Tucked does not only describe tucking a child or somebody into bed.

it is sometimes used in poetic situation to mean lying close up against or under something. Like as if the snow drifted close to the old pine tree. Sheep can be tucked up under a tree, or old pine tree an idyllic scene you see in The UK and used in poetry.

It is just that the older meaning has been forgotten in daily language by many current speakers.

Tucked in came first before being used to describe putting children to bed .

Could you check my poems? are they grammatically correct?

You gave me (a) hope

That filled my heart with joy.

It’s a pity that it was only for a short time.

It’s snowing, darling.

Snowflakes tuck/cover/envelop/smother the old pine tree.

Her soul dances in the light of day.