Are you my friend?
Are you my friend?
Sometimes we can make many friends, but some friends will leave us, and some friends always around us, we are together laugh or cry together, when we are sad, they will comfort us, and if we are happy, they are happy, too. They are always help me when I get into trouble.
So far, I still have many friends like this, I think I was so lucky.
I want to thank all my stay in nearby of friends and gone friends.
Thanks , and I love you, forever.
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Nice thoughts Xiao. Some minor corrections. Consider the following:
"We make many friends but some friends leave us while others stay and are always around us. We are together during our good and bad times. We can laugh and cry together. When we are sad and down they compfort us and when we are happy and joyful they are happy too. These close friends always help me when I get into trouble.
I have many close friends and I am so lucky to have them. I want to thank all friends whether they are with me now or have left me. Thanks for being a part of my life and I love you forever."
I have made some modifications also. Hope it helps. Best regards.
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