The spring is in the city
The spring is in the city. It is warm. Trees bloom beautifully. The birds are singing. But there are few people on the streets, few cars, it is very unusual for New York. The city is empty. Life has stopped. But I believe that everything will be fine. Life will return to the city. Laughter will sound on the streets, people will enjoy the sun and flowers. Take care.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 2
1
The spring is in the city
The spring is in the city. It is warm. Trees bloom beautifully. The birds are singing. But there are few people on the streets, few cars, it is very unusual for New York. The city is empty. Life has stopped. But I believe that everything will be fine. Life will return to the city. Laughter will sound on the streets, people will enjoy the sun and flowers. Take care.
Spring is in the city. It is warm. Trees bloom beautifully. The birds sing. But there are few people and cars on the streets. It is very unusual for New York. The city is empty. Life has stopped. But I believe that everything will be fine. Life will return to the city. Laughter will sound on the streets; people will enjoy the sun and flowers. Take care.
This was very nice to read. Your tone is very poetic and calming because you used present simple.
You did write one sentence in present progressive: The birds are singing.
Be careful with using too many commas. If you were speaking, it would sound natural. But in writing you need to use semicolons or periods in these examples you wrote. Or you need to add a conjunction, such as: and, but, or.
Very lovely!
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
