Hi! Nice work. Some minor corrections. "I" is always capitalized" -I will/ I'll never forget laptop and tried to google: you have to continue using the past tense you wrote "I turned" so you have to write "and tried" -a few sites and blogs: add the "s" at the end of sites and blogs to make them plural you looked at more then one site and blog -to learn the best way to start -I found four ways to start: you should write out in words small numbers, and continue with past tense form of verbs -English: all languages French, Spanish, Farsi, etc. are always capitalized. -I'm not sure what you mean by "preper a short english storybook" do you mean "read a short English storybook" ? -I started to study the first lesson in the/my grammar book, and I understood its meaning. However, step by step the lessons were getting harder and I was getting fed up and upset. -After a few months: add the "s" to make it plural more then 1 month -I stopped, because I couldn't understand the grammar, etc.: you don't have to say "and etc" usually etc is used after a list for example: "grammar, spelling, pronunciation, etc." -One night, when I was trying to sleep: don't have to repeat night -I thought to myself, "Hey man, nothing in the world can take the place of persistence and determination." put your thought in quotes, don't have to repeat "in the world" -I got out of my bed or I sat up in bed -and started to do/write examples of English grammar -It was going well, and I was feeling comfortable -I will talk about my English experience in my next notebook. -If I have made mistakes on this page, I would be happy, if you would help me.