A Super Fitness Expert
A fitness expert is popular not so much because of their expertise but how good or hot they look. This is especially true on any form of media. With some innate good looks, one can easily gain more publicity, likes or followers than many others who may possess even better physique could ever dream of. I’m not saying hard work isn’t important. I just feel that all too often what matters isn’t how hard we try but what we’re endowed with. The standing point is “never” equal. With a realization of that, how would you spend your time and which direction would you put your effort into?
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This is actually really well written but I can suggest a few changes to make it read more naturally.
A Super Fitness Expert
A fitness expert is popular not so much because of their expertise but because of how good or hot they look. This is especially true on in any form of media (or, on any form of social media). With some innate good looks, one can easily gain more publicity, likes or followers than many others who may possess an even better physique than they could ever dream of. I’m not saying hard work isn’t important. I just feel that all too often what matters isn’t how hard we try but what we’re endowed with. The standing (starting?) point is “never” equal. With a realization of that this realization, how would you spend your time and in which direction would you put direct your effort into?
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