Writing practice for my comics I'm trying to translate my comics in English. It's about sleepy schooldays in 2000s Korea. I guess there are many grammar mistakes and unnatural phrases. I'd appreciate it if you point out any! The title is 'sleepy story'. This comic is 5 pages long. I'll transcribe them one by one. A diligent student of Doggyland, Dangdang. A sunny and cozy spot, back of the classroom. 'I can't see the blackboard, but it's a nice place.' World's culture "...so, there is a such culture, called siesta." 'Oh, okay' <- indifferent reaction 'That kid is always dozing off and makes trouble. ' 'It would be quite comfortable if there is a siesta. It will never happen tobe scolded like that kid.' "Are you gonna sleep when you are taking SAT(수능)?!" *I can't find proper words for sound 탕탕, which is sound of knocking desk with wood stick. 'There's enough space for one dog to lie on the locker. Then, we can take a nap on there in order of mandatory volunteering points(점수 순서대로). Or, is it too harsh to take turns in order of test score?' Standing up to keep awaken until their turns come. 잘 부탁합니다🙇‍♀️