Autumn
Now Autumn begins in the country where I live. I like autumn because the leaves of threes change its color. They become yellow and red instead of green.
As the night falls early, the streets are cold and dark. It reminds me Christmas and hot chocolate. People come home faster, no one wants to go to shopping when the sky is dark.
When I was child, in a particuliar Sunday my family and I walked during two hours in the woods for picking chestnuts. Then, when we came back home my mother cooked it in the oven and we ate it at evening. Now I live in a city and I realise that chestnuts are very expensive !
During autumn, the air is sometimes warn and dry but sometimes the air is full of humidity.
Autumn is the time before the nature sleeps. It the perfect time to be warn by an open fire. But currently I have just a radiator in my room, not a open fire.
I can't wait to be in Winter, my preferred season.
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Autumn
Autumn is beginning in the country where I live. I like autumn because the leaves of the trees changes their colours. They become yellow and red instead of green.
As the night falls early, the streets are cold and dark. It reminds me of Christmas and hot chocolate. People come home sooner, as no one wants to go shopping when the sky is dark.
When I was a child, on a (particular) Sunday, my family and I walked for two hours in the woods (here you can say "to pick" if that was the purpose of the walk) picking chestnuts. Then, when we came back home my mother cooked it in the oven and we ate it in the evening/ that evening. Now I live in a city and I realise that chestnuts are very expensive!
During autumn, the air is sometimes warM and dry but sometimes the air is full of humidity. (The humidity is high/ the air is humid).
Autumn is the time before nature sleeps. It the perfect time to be warM by an open fire. (Keep warm or be warmed by ...) But currently I just have a radiator in my room, not aN open fire.
I can't wait to be in Winter, my preferred season.
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Autumn
Now Autumn begins in the country where I live. I like autumn because the leaves of trees change its their color. They become yellow and red instead of green.
As the night falls early, the streets are cold and dark. It reminds me of Christmas and hot chocolate. People come home faster, no one wants to go to shopping when the sky is dark.
When I was a child, in a particuliar Sundays my family and I walked during for two hours in the woods for picking chestnuts. Then, when we came back home my mother cooked it them in the oven and we ate them in the it at evening. Now I live in a city and I realise that chestnuts are very expensive!
During autumn, the air is sometimes warm and dry but sometimes the air is full of humidity.
Autumn is the time before the nature sleeps. It is the perfect time to be warm by an open fire. But currently I have just a radiator in my room, not a open fire.
I can't wait to be in for Winter, my preferred season.
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As winter comes the days get shorter,
People rush home,
I really enjoyed reading this. :) It reminded me of my rural up bringing. We collected chestnuts as well and cut an x over the point to make it easier to peel them once they were cooked. We cooked them directly on top of our wood burner. My favorite nuts were hazelnuts. We would collect them and then cook them on an outside fire in a leaf. Once they were cooked we would dip them in a honey comb that a local bee owner would give us. I too now live in a city and am very nostelgic about my childhood.
Alice :)
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