English writing practice (21 April)
1. In the past, some of Rome metro trains were hideous and dirty.
2. Women don't altogether accept to live with their parents-in-law.
3. Even under the Coronavirus lockdown, he still insists to go out to feed the two kittens in his another house.
4. To buy stocks can have high revenue, albeit it's high risk.
5. Japan's Kofuku happiness train station is a couple-oriented tourist attraction.
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English Writing Practice (21 April)
1. In the past, some of Rome's metro trains were hideous and dirty.
2. Women don't altogether accept living with their parents-in-law.
3. Even under the Coronavirus lockdown, he still insists to go out to feed the two kittens in his other house.
4. Buying stocks can bring high profits, albeit at high risk.
5. Japan's Kofuku Happiness Train Station is a couple-oriented tourist attraction.
My English writing practice today.
Thanks for your kind help.
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English writing practice (21 April)
1. In the past, some of Rome metro trains were hideous and dirty.
In the past, some of the Rome metro trains were hideous and dirty.
2. Women don't altogether accept to live with their parents-in-law.
Women don't all accept living with their parents-in-law.
(In America you're more likely to hear the word "in-laws" than "parents-in-law" during casual conversation. I'm not sure if other English speaking countries do this too)
3. Even under the Coronavirus lockdown, he still insists to go out to feed the two kittens in his another house.
Even under the Coronavirus lockdown, he still insists to go out to feed the two kittens in his other house.
4. To buy stocks can have high revenue, albeit it's high risk.
Buying stocks can lead to high revenue, although it's high risk.
(Other people might substitute a different word for "have", for example "give". "Albeit" is a tricky word. We don't use it very much, at least not in America, so when using it you want to be careful you're using it correctly, otherwise it will really stand out. The problem here is you can't use albeit in a clause that could be a sentence on its own. In this case "It's high risk" is a complete sentence, so albeit doesn't work.)
5. Japan's Kofuku happiness train station is a couple-oriented tourist attraction.
(I don't see any problems with this one)
My English writing practice today.
Thanks for your kind help.
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