Dear Diary,
It’s a balmy, sunny day, and I got up at the same time. Today I had a lesson with a teacher on italki, he helped me study Japanese, unfortunately the internet connection was pretty unstable and always cut off, it annoyed me a lot. Fortunately he was a good teacher, he prepared several materials for our lesson, and he taught me some simple sentences and grammar. And when we have finished our lesson, he sent me some voice messages on Skype to correct my pronunciation. How much I learned today, although the internet connection was very poor during our lesson, I am able to self-study the material later.
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Dear Diary,
It’s a balmy, sunny day, and I got up at the same time as usual. Today I had a lesson with a teacher on italki,.(End the sentence with a period) hHe helped me study Japanese, but unfortunately the internet connection was pretty unstable and always kept cutting off,. (End the sentence with a period) iIt annoyed me a lot. Fortunately he was a good teacher,. (End the sentence with a period) hHe prepared several a lot of materials for our lesson, and he taught me some simple sentences and grammar. And wWhen we have finished our lesson, he sent me some voice messages on Skype to correct my pronunciation. How much I learned a lot today, although the internet connection was very poor during our lesson,. (End the sentence) I am will be able to self-study the material later. (This sentence sounds a little odd to me - I would say "I will be able to study the material on my own later")
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Dear Diary,
It’s a balmy, (you need a , because you've listed more than one adjective) sunny day, and I got up at the same time (sounds more natural and it's also better worded) as usual. Today I had a lesson with a teacher on italki, he helped me study Japanese.(This sentence was a bit too long) Unfortunately the internet connection was pretty unstable and always cut off, it annoyed me a lot. Fortunately he was a good teacher, he prepared several materials for our lesson, and he taught me some simple sentences and grammar. (It's best not to start sentences with 'and') When we finished our lesson, he sent me some voice messages (you used 'some' which means the noun needs to be plural) on Skype to correct my pronunciation. How much I learned today (I'm not sure what you mean, maybe I learnt a lot today?), although the internet connection was very poor during our lesson, I am able to self-study the material later.
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