Daily routine
Good evening.
My name is Natali Caamaño. I am a nurse and I work in Country clinic in Bogotá.
I wake up at four o clock, I get up at half past four and make breakfast . At five I take a shower, get dressed and get ready for work. I always have a big breakfast, brush my teeth and leave home.
At six, I usually take a bus. I get to work at quarter to seven. At seven I receive patiens, administer and registered medications. I assing responsibilities to the nursing assistants. I write nursing notes.
When is necessary I order and return medications to the farmacy, because patients are discharged or they have changes in their doses. At One I have lunch. After I continue administering medications like in the morning and at seven I shift change. I go back home. I get home at nine, I cook my dinner, brush my teeth, study english. I usually go to bed at eleven.
This is basically my daily routine
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Daily routine
Good evening.
My name is Natali Caamaño. I am a nurse and I work in a country clinic in Bogotá.
I wake up at four o clock, I get up at half past four and make breakfast. At five I take a shower, get dressed and get ready for work. I always have a big breakfast then brush my teeth and leave home.
At six, I usually take a bus and I get to work at quarter to seven. At seven I receive patients, administer and registered medications. I assing assign responsibilities to the nursing assistants. I write before writing nursing notes.
When is necessary, I order and return medications to the pharmacy, because patients are have been discharged or they have changes in their doses. At one I have lunch at one o'clock. After, I continue administering medications like I did in the morning and at seven I shift change my shift ends. I go back home. It takes me two hours to travel home so I get there at nine; I cook my dinner, brush my teeth and study english. I usually go to bed at eleven.
This is basically my daily routine.
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Daily routine
Good evening.
My name is Natali Caamaño. I am a nurse and I work in a Ccountry clinic in Bogotá.
I wake up at four o clock, I get up at half past four and make breakfast . At five I take a shower, get dressed and get ready for work. I always have a big breakfast, brush my teeth and leave home.
At six, I usually take a bus. and I get to work at quarter to seven. At From seven, I receive patients, administer and registered medications. I assing asign responsibilities to the nursing assistants.and I write nursing notes.
When it is necessary I order and or return medications to the fpharmacy, because patients are have been discharged or they have had changes in their doses made to their dosages.At One I have lunch. Afterwards I continue administering medications like as in the morning and at seven I the shift changes. I go back travel home. and I usually I get home at by nine. , I cook my dinner, brush my teeth, and study english. I usually go to bed at eleven.
This is basically my daily routine
Wow, busy day! Well done you if you still find time to study after that long day. The piece is quite well written and many of the changes are just to make it read more naturally. Can I also suggest that you try to avoid listing things ie I did this, then I did that and afterwards I did this. It reads better if you can expand a little on your activities eg when you say you usually take a bus this sounds better than just saying I take a bus so if you can do this in other parts of the piece. For the same reason maybe when writing about your job instead of giving a list of things you do you could say something like "It is also my responsibility to .........." or " As part of my role I must ensure that........" This will make the piece read more naturally and also make it more interesting.
Well done
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Buen trabajo Natali! No voy a corregir tu escrito, porque otros ya lo han hecho. Tengo muchos amigos que están medicos y enfermeras y que están trabajando ahora en hospitales alrededor mi país. Estoy muy impresionado que tienes la energía para estudiar inglés despues un día muy largo en tu trabajo. Especialmente ahora, cuando los tensiones son muy altos. Estoy seguro que la gente en tu país son muy agradecido por tu trabajo.
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Gracias
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I wake up at four o'clock
administer and register medications
I assign responsibilities to the nursing assistants OR I assess the work of the nursing assistants
When necessary, (or when it is necessary) I order and return medications to the pharmacy
At one I have lunch.
After, I continue administering medications like in the morning and at seven I end my shift.
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