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'The Impact of the Coronavirus Pandemic on Our Sense of Well-being"
Nowadays the entire world is struggling with the Coronavirus pandemic.
Little do we know that pandemic has not just threatened the physical health of millions but also wreaked havoc on the emotional and mental well-being. People live in a constant fear of contagion and as a result they look at each other suspiciously and lose confidence even in their relatives. We are hiding in our homes away from potential danger. But will we be able to stand much longer in solitude away from our friends, long walks, sunshine? It undoubtedly has a detrimental effect on our well-being.
On the one hand, it is enormously harmful due to the fact that our ‘freedom’ is limited in some way. Consequently many people cannot develop their passions related to sports such as jogging, hiking, cycling. For many these activities can also be the meaning of life. What is more, a lot of people lose their jobs and they have no stable source of income, consequently it can be significantly problematic and for some people even traumatic.
However on the other hand, We can stop for a moment, consider many crucial issues, and appreciate what we have just lost. Only now can we realise how happy we were before pandemic.
It is definitely obvious that we have become more cautious since we try to wash our hands more often, not to touch the handles and railings, keep a distance between interlocutor, wear masks and gloves. Over time, our behaviour becomes even obsessive. Because of that we are afraid to shake hands can have a harmful impact on human relationship.
Nevertheless, people should take precautions to prevent the spread of coronavirus. In addition, personal hygiene also protects us from other diseases. Hopefully, thanks to this epidemic, people will understand that washing hands regularly, especially before meals, should be a priority.
To sum up, we can conclude that the coronavirus pandemic has a huge impact on our lives and well-being. BUT do not lose your mind and let’s take care of our loved one !
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Will you please check my article and let me know if it's grammatically correct?
'The Impact of the Coronavirus Pandemic on Our Sense of Well-being"
Nowadays the entire world is struggling with the Coronavirus pandemic.
Little do we know that the pandemic has not just threatened the physical health of millions but also wreaked havoc on their emotional and mental well-being. People live in a constant fear of contagion and as a result they look at each other suspiciously and lose confidence even in their relatives. We are hiding in our homes away from potential danger. But will we be able to stand much longer in solitude away from our friends, long walks or sunshine? It undoubtedly has a detrimental effect on our well-being.
On the one hand, it is enormously harmful due to the fact that our ‘freedom’ is limited in some way. Consequently many people cannot develop their passions related to sports such as jogging, hiking or cycling. For many these activities can also be the meaning of life. What is more, a lot of people will lose their jobs and they will have no stable source of income, consequently it can be significantly problematic and for some people even traumatic.
However on the other hand, we can stop for a moment, consider many crucial issues, and appreciate what we have just lost. Only now can we realise how happy we were before the pandemic.
It is definitely obvious that we have become more cautious since we try to wash our hands more often, not to touch the handles and railings, keep a distance between interlocutor, wear masks and gloves. Over time, our behaviour becomes even obsessive, because of that we are afraid to shake hands which can have a harmful impact on human relationships.
Nevertheless, people should take precautions to prevent the spread of coronavirus. In addition, personal hygiene also protects us from other diseases. Hopefully, thanks to this epidemic, people will understand that washing hands regularly, especially before meals, should be a priority.
To sum up, we can conclude that the coronavirus pandemic has a huge impact on our lives and well-being. BUT do not lose your mind and let’s take care of our loved one !
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