My house
My house is a little strange. It has wheels and it move. My house has a bathroom, a shower, living room, kitchen and a bed. You can see television since the bed but usually don't we use it. We like television but we like a lot of more look at for window the landscape. And how our house has wheels , the landscape always changes. My house is small because for us is more important what is outside of house than things than is inside. My house is near the beach but near the mountain too. My house has solar electricity and hot water. It has heating too. In my house live my wife, my two dogs and i. One of my dogs it name luna and it is very good. It is twelve years old. The other is fat and is seven years old. We travel a lot of and our dogs sleep when travel. We love travel because we love learnd new things.
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My house
My house is a little strange. It has wheels and it moves. My house has a bathroom, a shower, living room, kitchen and a bed. You can see watch the television since from the bed but usually don't we use it. We like the television but we like a lot of more look at for window the landscape to look at the landscape out the window a lot more. And how now (that) our house has wheels , the landscape always changes. My house is small because for us, is more important what is outside of house than things than is that are inside. My house is near the beach, but (it can also be) near the mountain too. My house has solar electricity and hot water. It has heating, too. In my house lives my wife, my two dogs and i I. One of my dogs it name is named luna Luna and it is very good. It is twelve years old. The other is fat and is seven years old. We travel a lot of and our dogs sleep when travel. We love to travel because we love to learnd new things.
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My House
My house is a little strange. It is on wheels and it moves. My house has a bathroom, a shower, a living room, a kitchen and a bedroom. I can watch television in bed but don't usually do that. I do like watching television but I like even more looking out through the window at the landscape. And because our house is on wheels, the landscape outside changes constantly. My house is small because what is outside the house is more important to us that what is inside. My house is near the beach but near the mountains too. It is solar-powered and we have hot water and heating. I live with my wife and two dogs. One of my dogs is called Luna and he/she is very good. He/she is twelve years old. The other dog is fat and is seven years old. We travel a lot and our dogs sleep when we travel. We love travelling because we love to learn new things.
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My house
My house is a little strange. It has wheels and it moves. My house has a bathroom, a living room, a kitchen and a bedroom. You can see television near the bed but usually we don't use it. We like to watch TV but we like look out the window at the landscapes. And as our house has wheels, the landscape always changes. My house is small because for us what is outside of the house is more important than things that is inside. My house is near the beach and near the mountain too. My house has solar electricity and hot water. It has heating too. My wife, my two dogs and I live in the house. One of my dogs Luna is very good. She is twelve years old (if the pet ‘belongs to the family’, ‘he’ or ‘she’ may often be suitable). Another one/dog is fat and it is seven years old. We travel a lot and our dogs sleep during the travel. We love traveling because we love learnd new things.
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Good job! There way only a few minor grammar mistakes, but very easy to understand!
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My house
My house is a little strange. It has wheels and it moves. My house has a bathroom, a shower, living room, kitchen and a bed. You can see the television from the bed but usually we don’t use it. We like television but we like looking out of our window at the landscape. With our house having wheels, the landscape always changes. My house is small because for us it’s more important what’s outside of house than things inside. My house is near the beach but near the mountain too. My house has solar electricity and hot water; It has heating too. In my house lives my wife, my two dogs and I. One of my dogs is named luna and it is very good; It is twelve years old. The other is fat and is seven years old. We travel a lot and our dogs sleep while we travel. We love traveling because we love learning new things.
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