A nice weekend with my family
After a long time winter the weather in April has many sunny day， all of the outside green things make me happy.So we decide go to Chongqing center park for this weekend with my family.This center park nearest 25 km my home and Known as biggest park in Asia .
However just need 35 minutes to there that my first time go to the center park,Because no time on weekend while member of family .I drive a while ford white car and 5 person family that my wife Feng、Two boy and me. we worry about the weather down a litter rain when driving on the road .The traffic not bad so we driving fast to center park.
We stop the car in outside parking area and get a umbrella. but rain get away just a moment and sunrise come bake too. we take a photo on lawn all of family.It's looks too beautiful,Two boy said I like green and big lawn and the blue sky. Them jump and run around the park .Big and small trees are covered with green leaves.
The child play and we walking a longtime in the park until down the sun .It's really prefect weekend with my family.If has anytime we would go outside with family.
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A nice weekend with my family
After a long winter the weather in April has many sunny days, everything is nice and green and makes me happy. So we decided to go to Chongqing center park for this weekend with my family.This center park is 25 km from my home and is known as the biggest park in Asia.
However it only takes 35 minutes to get there and this is my first time i went to the center park as there is no time at the weekend.I drive a white ford car and we are a 5 person family, my wife Feng, two boys and me. We worry about the weather as it rains a bit (drizzles) when driving down the road .The traffic was not bad so we drove fast to center park.
We stopped the car in the car park and took an umbrella but the rain stopped for a moment and the sun came out. We took a photo on the lawn with all of the family. It looks so beautiful. My two boys said they loved the green and big park and the blue sky. They jumped and ran around the park. Large and small trees are covered with green leaves.
The children play and we walk for a long time in the park until the sun goes down. It is really a perfect weekend with my family. If I have any time I always go outside with my family.
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A nice weekend with my family.
After a long winter, the weather in April has many sunny days. All of the green things outside makes me happy! So, we decide to go to Chongqing center park this weekend with my family. This center park is 25 km from my home and is known as the biggest park in Asia!
We only needed 35 minutes to get there. It was the first time I had ever been to the center park, that's because there is no time on weekends whilst a member of my family. I drive a white Ford car and there are 4 people in my family; my wife Feng, two boys and me. We worried about the weather while driving on the road and it rained a little. The traffic was not bad, so we drove fast to center park.
We stopped the car in the outside parking area and got an umbrella, but the rain went away for just a moment and the sunshine came back too. We took a photo on the lawn with all of the family. It looks too beautiful! My two boys said "I like the big, green lawn and the blue sky". They jumped and ran around the park. Big and small trees were covered with green leaves.
The children played and we walked for a long time in the park, until sunset . It was really a perfect weekend with my family. If I have any time, I will go outside with my family.
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A nice weekend with my family.
After a long winter the weather in April has had many sunny days, and all of the greenery outside makes me so happy! We decided to go to Chongqing Centre Park this weekend with my family. This centre park is 25 km my home and is known as the biggest park in Asia.
It only took 35 minutes to get there. It is my first time going to a Centre Park because I have no time on weekends. I drive a five person White Ford car that is big enough for myself, my wife and two boys. We worry about the weather a little when we are driving but the traffic isn't bad so we get there fast.
We park the car and take out an umbrella. In that moment, the rain stops and the hot sun comes out so we take a family photo on the lawn. It's looks very beautiful and the two boy's say they like the green grass and the blue sky. They jump around and run in the park. Trees of all sizes are covered with green leaves.
The children play and we walk a long time in the park until the sun sets. It is a really prefect weekend with my family. If there is any time, we would go outside with family.
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