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envitonmental problems Nowadays environmental problem is a central topic of the most people interest. Without a doubt, we should be environment-educated people, but the most important help which we can take is from our government. To begin with, there are lots of different pollution around the world. For example, common problem of cities is air pollution because of auto emissions. Also some industries dumb waste materials on land resulting in land pollution. Some areas are faced with fresh water supply problem caused by water pollution. Most of these problems government can solve and people must help them. Secondly, almost every person has got a private car or if you have not got you use a public transport. Most of these people can not afford electric cars, but government can reduce price on them. Also, it is possible to issue strict rules for manufactures and some industries, motivate and help them to install some anti-pollution equipment. In conclusion, I would like to say that all of these environmental problems must be solved by joining forces, society and government together. ______________________________________________________ I really hate this topic, but it's the most popular theme for essays. So I hope that there is a bit of logic:) If you check my essay, please, could you tell about this essay in general? Thank you

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You can check below and see if you get any ideas, I made some correction for you to consider. Nowadays, the environmental problem is an important topic for many people. Without a doubt, we should be environmentally-educated people, but the most critical help which we can receive is from our government. There are many kinds of pollution around the world. For example, the common problem of cities is air pollution because of auto emissions. First, various industries pollute the land by inappropriately dumping hazardous waste materials. Some areas in the world face a problem with the fresh water supply caused by water pollution. Most of these problems the government can solve and people must help. Secondly, almost every person has got a private car or use public transportation. Most of these people can not afford electric vehicles, but the government can reduce the price on them. Also, it is possible to issue strict rules for manufactures and some industries, to motivate and help them to install some anti-pollution equipment. In conclusion, I would like to say that we can solve these environmental problems by joining forces between society and the government.

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