A Bird Hit my Window
This morning I woke up because of my sisters are sreaming. I was shocked and I asked them whats happen. They're told me that a bird just hit our window. I'm going to the balkon and I saw a green bird there. I'm confuse what should I do. I like animals but I'm afraid if I have to carry or hold them. The bird looks dizzy. So I call my brother to make a sure that bird is fine. Fortunately the bird is fine.
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A Bird Hit my Window
This morning I woke up because of my sisters are sreaming (you could say "because my sisters were screaming" or alternatively, "because of my sisters' screaming". I was shocked and I asked them what has happened . They're told me that a bird just hit our window. I'm going I went to the balkon balcony and I saw a green bird there. I'm was confused as to what should I should do. I like animals but I'm afraid if I have to carry or hold them. The bird looked dizzy. So I called my brother to make a sure that the bird was fine. Fortunately the bird was fine.
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Nice work. They're told me that a bird just hit our window -- Just They at the beginning. "They are" means you're declaring the state of your sisters, but they just told you something.
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