Pollution and damage to the environment
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All of us think that pollution and damage to the environment is one the most serious problems in the world, however the harmful effects can be minimized. This essay will discuss these problems and consider ways to improve the situation our planet.
First of all, transport is the biggest source of air pollution. Actually, reducing transport traffic could be the best solution to minimize air pollution and damage.
Secondly, water pollution is one the main environmental issues that we are facing. Therefore, we need to invest in the water treatment systems and all countries must focus on development innovative water solutions.
Apart from this, my own idea is creating National policy for environment protection, reduction in energy consumption, advanced research to environment friendly development and the provision of fund in national budget for related research.
In conclusion, I do not think the problems with pollution and damage to the environment can be solved, because our present civilization is creating serious problems to environment, and we cannot stop these harmful activities. In my opinion, the only decision is that all of us have to go for environmental friendly development.
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Pollution and damage to the environment
Hello there, everyone! Could you check my essay for grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors?
Essay
All of us think that pollution and damage to the environment is one the most serious problems in the world, however the harmful effects can be minimized. This essay will discuss these problems and consider ways to improve the situation our planet.
First of all, transport is the biggest source of air pollution. Actually, reducing transport traffic could be the best solution to minimize air pollution and damage.
Secondly, water pollution is one the main environmental issues that we are facing. Therefore, we need to invest in the water treatment systems and all countries must focus on the development of innovative water solutions.
Apart from this, my own idea is creating National policy for environment protection, reduction in energy consumption, advanced research to environment friendly development and the provision of funds in from the national budget for related research.
In conclusion, I do not think the problems with pollution and damage to the environment can be solved, because our present civilization is creating serious problems to environment, and we cannot stop these harmful activities. In my opinion, the only decision is that all of us have to go for environmental friendly development.
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