Hey Shirokuma! I’m not sure of the context, so I might be off, but here’s what I make of it: I’m going to Gifu today because I want to supervise at the facility where my students study. The 5th grade at the elementary school gets to experience mountain life every year, and I’m going to go to help my students feel safe. Hope this helps! 🙂

Hello Shirokuma! nice work :) here are some modifications that might be helpful. "I am going to Gifu today": because generally in native english, if something is happening today we will use present tense. "because I want to see the facility where my students stay and study": see is probably a better translation here because "watch" is usually used to describe viewing an action take place. if you are talking about students (plural), make sure your conjugations are consistent. I like your use of metaphor, I would maybe consider different phrasing to sound more natural. An example of this could be "elementary students in 5th grade have mountainous life experiences every year, therefore I'll go to keep my students safe" Great job! I hope this is helpful :)