Hi Shannon! I made some edits to help your diary entry flow more naturally. Keep up the good work! :)

Dear Diary,

It’s a rainy Monday, and I got up as usual. Today I watched an English movie and I really enjoyed it. The leading man is masculine, handsome and strong. He smiled faintly and was very attractive. He used to be a teen heartthrob. However, in real life, he's a womanizer who dates countless supermodels just for their looks. Yet, he really fits the film perfectly. He was popular several years ago and many fans were stanning him. However, since then, he's gotten some bad press, such as reports of him using drugs.