Are there any mistakes in the essay? Hello world! Could you help me, please? Are there any mistakes in the essay? I have just found one of my earliest essays in English. As far as I remember it was written four or five years ago. Let us take a closer look. "Today I am going to tell you a fascinating story of a picture which was taken by one of my friends last spring. As you can see in the picture I was sitting on Artem's shoulders and playing the guitar. Apart from that, we were standing on the edge of a cliff, but we weren't afraid of anything, because of traditional Czech beer. Oleg was recording us with his action camera, when someone exclaimed: "Look! What a breathtaking view!". Almost instantly Artem turned round even though I was still on his shoulders. It was a scary and amusing moment at the same time, but I kept playing the guitar without interruption". Now I realize the essay was pretty simple, but it helped to extend my vocabulary and improve my English as well. Besides, nowadays I don't drink alcohol at all and, moreover, I always try to convince people to give up drinking and start doing something useful for their health. Thank you for reading!