写作练习。我做得怎么样？你明白我写的吗?
写作练习。我做得怎么样？你明白我写的吗？我喜欢用中文写作，因为它能帮助我记住汉字
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Hi Shamira, I like your hand writing. It looks so beautiful.
I think you've done a great job in Chinese writing. But if you want to advance your writing, I have a few suggestions for you.
第一，我的名字是夏漫然，其实这有点English思维，因为English里面一般会说my name is....。但在中文里面，一般就直接说，我是夏漫然就可以了。在中文中，一般小孩子做介绍的时候会说我的名字是夏漫然，但大人一般不会这样说。
第二， 福州中国，应该是中国福州，但更准确的说法是中国福建省的省会城市福州市。或者说，我住在福州，它是中国福建省的省会城市。
第三，我来自美国和我是美国人其实信息是重复的，选其一即可。
第三，文章是顺序可以稍微修改一下：我是夏漫然，我来自美国，是一名英语老师。我非常喜欢中国，现在住在中国福建省的省会城市福州市。
Hope it useful for you
Have a great day
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“现在我住在福州中国”
现在我住在中国福州
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现在我住在中国福州。It's a Chinese expression.
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gj!
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Besides what others have said, “ 谢谢大家！” is “Thank you everybody“, “谢谢你” is “thank you (singular you)”. Don’t say “谢谢你大家” that’s grammatically wrong. PS : Your handwritten Chinese characters are great! I can read them without any difficulty!
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