Guys, please, check my essay about Harry and the way how Weasleys met the morning before school
'It took a long while to get started next morning' - I think this phrase could describe my life. I am a procrastinator, I need a huge amount of time to be ready and get started or set off somewhere. I usually late, and that's why the way how Weasleys grab their things, colliding on the stairs on the first September, is so familiar to me.
Weasleys were up at cock-crow, but it didn't help. It seems like they were living in chaos and it was difficult to do things ahead of time. Also, maybe, they got distracted easily, because three of their children had forgotten something important and all the family went back three times.
I find it's nice when I read about it, but I know how embarrassing it is, to force all the company to go back and being late together.
So did the Weasley, they riched the station just before the train arrives and they had felt worried and anxious, of course. I think, one of the reasons, when bad things happen, that people feel worried and anxious and they can't use time wisely or behave normally. That's why I think it was the best moment for Harry and Ron to miss the train. There was a coincidence, but it was good for Dobby at the same time. Dobby didn't reckon just one thing - Harry and Ron wanted to go to Hogwarts as much as they could. And they found the way very fast.
When I went to Russia a few weeks ago, for example, it was a disaster - I was getting late, and I wasn't sure that I got all the essentials, but knowing myself, I decided not to come back. And everything was ok.
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Guys, please, check my essay about Harry and the way how Weasleys met the morning before school
'It took a long while to get started (the) next morning' (It takes me a long while to get started in the mornings)- I think this phrase could describe my life. I am a procrastinator, I need a huge amount of time to be ready and get started or (to) set off somewhere. I (am) usually late, and that's why the way how Weasleys grab(ing) their things, colliding on the stairs on the first September, (it) is so familiar to me.
Weasleys were up at cock(s)-crow, but it didn't help. It seems like they were living in chaos and it was difficult to do things ahead of time. Also, maybe, they got distracted easily,(unneeded) because three of their children had forgotten something important and all the family went back three times.
I find it's (it) nice when I read about it, but I know how embarrassing it is, to force all the company to go back and being late together.
So did the Weasley(s), they riched(reached) the station just before the train arrives and they had felt worried and anxious, of course. I think, (this is) one of the reasons, when bad things happen, that people feel worried and anxious and they can't use time wisely or behave normally. That's(This is) why I think it was the best moment for Harry and Ron to miss the train. There (It was) was a coincidence, but it was good for Dobby at the same time. Dobby didn't reckon just one thing - Harry and Ron wanted to go to Hogwarts as much as they could. (Options- 1. Harry and Ron were set on getting to Hogwarts. 2.Harry and Ron really wanted to get to Hogwarts) And they found the way very fast.
When I went to Russia a few weeks ago, for example, it was a disaster - I was getting(or you can say running late) late, and I wasn't sure that I got all the essentials, but knowing myself, I decided not to come back. And everything was ok. (try not to start sentences with and)
I really enjoyed reading this!! It is fun! I hope this helped!
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