The second part of my writing. Please, control my mistakes ))))
Despite everything his wild desire was to find and punish guilty of death of the King. But not only it rivals us how Hamlet’s character versatile is. His suspiciousness opens new traits such as desire of revenge, sharp intelligence, cunning, cruelty, in some times recklessness. The author describes us that the main character was a good actor too. The roll of demented man was played perfect by Hamlet. He pretended following strictly his secret plan. Hatred forces to make him many mistakes and awareness comes to him before catastrophic events.
Later on, death of his dear love Ophelia sobered his mind and reminded to the Prince of Denmark that in chase of justice he lost the most important thing in life is love.
When Hamlet faces himself death, he shows us that he is still sensitive, moral, merciful and fair Prince. William Shakespeare describes Hamlet like a person with the best human qualities in society which always needs the world.
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The second part of my writing [a native speaker would say essay.]Please, control correct my mistakes ))))
[false cognate- please correct my mistakes= исправлять/ control=контролироватьъ
Despite everything his wild desire was to find and punish those guilty of death of the King. But not only it rivalsreveals to us how Hamlet’s character versatile is [A native would say “how complex Hamlet’s character is} . His suspiciousness opens reveals new traits such as desire of for revenge, sharp intelligence, cunning, cruelty, in some times recklessness. The author describes tous that the main character was a good actor too. The roll of demented man was played perfectly[ perfect = adjective, perfectly= adverb. Илеальный/идеално]
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by Hamlet. He pretended following strictlytried to follow[притворяться= pretend in this context; претендовать= false cognate; the translation is not pretend but claim]
his secret plan. Hatred forces to make him many mistakes and awareness comes to him before catastrophic events.
Later on, thedeath of his dear love Ophelia sobered his mind and reminded to the Prince [remind SOMEONE = я напоминаю кому-л] of Denmark that in chasepursiut [pursuit= серемление к справедливости, chase = погоня ] of justice he lost the most important thing in life is love.The most important thing in his life—love (we would use – not is)
When Hamlet faces himself [word oder: When Hamlet himself faces;когда он сам..] death, he shows us that he is still Asensitive, moral, merciful and fair Prince. William Shakespeare describes Hamlet like a person with the best human qualities in society which always needs the world.[ Not clear what is meant by this last sentence- perhaps “describes Hamlet as a person with the the best human qualities in a society (or world) which always needs them]
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Despite everything, his wildest desire was to find and punish the guilty behind the death of the King. But not only are we rivaled by how versatile Hamlet’s character is, his suspiciousness exposed new traits about him such as his desire of revenge, sharp intelligence, cunning, cruelty, and in some times, his recklessness.
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