When I Was a Child.
At the age of seven I had a birthday party. I’m telling you about this especific one, because I don’t remember the others. I don’t even remember if I've had others.
At that time, birthday parties were very different from now. They were much simpler than today.
There were only some close friends and everything happened in our house.
The cake and the candies were made by our parents or relatives, and only some photos were taken.
Today these parties are almost public, for many people, and the biggest party is the best one.
Profissional photographers are hired to take several photo for later been published in the Instagram or Facebook.
Now, everybody is famous in a way.
Even with only one photo of my seven years birthday party, I can remember everything much better than I remember of my last weekend.
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When I Was a Child.
At the age of seven I had a birthday party. I’m telling you about this especific one, because I don’t remember the others. I don’t even remember if I've had others.
At that time, birthday parties were very different from now. They were much simpler than today.
There were only some close friends and everything happened in our house.
The cake and the candies were made by our parents or relatives, and only some photos were taken.
Today these parties are almost public, for many people, and the biggest party is the best one.
Profissional photographers are hired to take several photo for later been published in the Instagram or Facebook.
Now, everybody is famous in a way.
Even with only one photo of my seven years birthday party, I can remember everything much better than I remember of my last weekend.
When I Was a Child.
At the age of seven I had a birthday party. I’m telling you about this specific one, because I don’t remember the others. I don’t even remember if I've had others.
At that time, birthday parties were very different from now. They were much simpler than today.
There were only some close friends and the whole party happened in our house.
The cake and the candies were made by our parents or relatives, and only some photos were taken.
Today these parties are almost public, for many people, and the biggest party is the best one.
Professional photographers are hired to take several photos to publish later on Instagram or Facebook
Now, everybody is famous in a way.
Even with only one photo of my birthday party at seven years old, I can remember everything much better than I remember my last weekend.
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When I was seven years old, I had a birthday party. I’m writing to you about this especific specific one, because I don’t remember my other birthdays. I don’t even remember if I ever had other birthday parties. At that time, birthday parties were very different than they are now. They were much simpler than they are today. I only invited some close friends, and the party was a my house everything happened in our house. My parents and relatives made my cake and some candies We only took a few photos ( or pictures). Today these parties are almost public,?? usually many people are invited, and it seems that the bigger the party the better. Often Professional photographers are hired to take several photos that later are posted inon Instagram or Facebook. Now, it is as if everybody is famous in someway. Even with only a couple photos from my birthday party when I was seven, I can still remember everything much better than I can remember last weekend.
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