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Traditional Chinese stories about three kingdoms(the 2nd story) In ancient years, There were three kingdoms in China, named Wei, Shu and Wu kingdom. These three kingdoms were always at odds with each other for expanding their area. Zhuge, prime minister of Shu, who had led six battles for conquering Wei. He is a talent strategist, there are many legendary stories about him, though he failed to conquered Wei finally, and died during the sixth battle because of illness. Now I will talk a story happened in one of these six battles. Sima, a general of Wei, who led Wei’s army to struggle against Zhuge. One day Sima toke a large mount of soldiers to attack a city guarded by Zhuge. At that time most Zhuge’s soldiers were sent to transport food which was needed by the army, and there were only few older or injured soldiers stay in the city. The situation was very urgent. To Sima’s surprise, Some farmers who were pretended by zhuge’s soliders, opened the gate and sweeping the floor. Zhuge was sat on the towers and playing a musical instrument called guzheng. Sima couldn’t found any fluster from Zhuge’s musical rhythm. Sima believed that Zhuge used to be very a careful person, and Zhuge had done nothing made himself in danger. He predicted that there were thousands of soldiers in or around this city, Maybe he had already been surrounded by Zhuge’s army. So, Sima commanded his army give up attack and retreat as soon as possible. Because of Sima’s retreat, Zhuge got time to gather his army and reinforce the city. This story have been talking thousands of years, which is called “the strategy of an empty city”. Thanks for reading this and correcting my writing mistakes.

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Traditional Chinese stories about three kingdoms(the 2nd story)

In ancient years, There were three kingdoms in China, named Wei, Shu and Wu kingdom. These three kingdoms were always at odds with each other for expanding their area.
Zhuge, prime minister of Shu, who had led six battles for conquering Wei. He is was a talent strategist, and there are many legendary stories about him, although he failed to conquered Wei finally,. and He died during the sixth battle because of illness. (through illness would be better)
Now I will talk tell a story of what happened in one of these six battles. Sima, a general of Wei, who led Wei’s army to struggle against Zhuge. One day Sima toke took a large mount batallion of soldiers to attack a city guarded by Zhuge. At that time most of Zhuge’s soldiers were sent to transport food which was needed by the army, and there were only a few older or injured soldiers stay remaining in the city. The situation was very urgent.
To Sima’s surprise, Ssome farmers, who were pretended deceived by Zhuge’s soldiers, opened the gate and sweeping the floor?? . Zhuge was sat sitting on in the towers and playing a musical instrument called a guzheng. Sima couldn’t found any fluster ??? from Zhuge’s musical rhythm. Sima believed that Zhuge used to be was very a careful person, and that Zhuge had done wouldn't do anything to put nothing made himself in danger. He predicted that there were thousands of soldiers in or around this city, and maybe he had already been surrounded by Zhuge’s army. So, Sima commanded his army to give up attack and retreat as soon as possible. Because of Sima’s retreat, Zhuge had got time to gather his army and reinforce the city.
This story has been told for have been talking thousands of years, and which is called “the strategy of an empty city”.
Thanks for reading this and correcting my writing mistakes.
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Traditional Chinese stories about three kingdoms(the 2nd story)

In ancient times, there were three kingdoms in China, named the Wei, Shu and Wu kingdoms. These three kingdoms were always at odds with each other as each tried to expand.
Zhuge was the prime minister of Shu who had led six battles for conquering Wei. He was a talent strategist, and there are many legendary stories about him, although in the end he failed to conquer Wei, and died during the sixth battle because of illness.
Now I will tell a story that happened in one of these six battles. Sima was a general of Wei, who led Wei’s army against Zhuge. One day Sima took a large number of soldiers to attack a city guarded by Zhuge. At that time most of Zhuge’s soldiers were sent to transport food which was needed by the army, and there were only few older or injured soldiers remaining in the city. The situation was very critical.
To Sima’s surprise, some farmers who were protected [Is this the word you mean?] by Zhuge’s soliders, were sweeping the floor and opened the gate. Zhuge was sitting in a tower and playing a musical instrument called guzheng. Sima couldn’t disturb Zhuge’s musical rhythm. Sima believed that Zhuge used to be very a careful person, and Zhuge had done nothing but put [?] himself in danger. He predicted that there were thousands of soldiers in or around this city, and maybe he had already been surrounded by Zhuge’s army. So, Sima commanded his army to give up the attack and retreat as soon as possible. Because of Sima’s retreat, Zhuge got time to gather his army and reinforce the city.
This story, which is called “the strategy of an empty city”, has been told for thousands of years.
Thanks for reading this and correcting my writing mistakes.
1
Traditional Chinese stories about three kingdoms(the 2nd story)

In ancient years, There were three kingdoms in China, named Wei, Shu and Wu kingdom. These three kingdoms were always at odds with each other for expanding their area.
Zhuge, prime minister of Shu, who had led six battles for conquering Wei. He was a talent strategist, there are many legendary stories about him, though he failed to conquer Wei finally , and died during the sixth battle because of illness.
Now I will talk about a story happened in one of these six battles. Sima, a general of Wei, who led Wei’s army to struggle against Zhuge. One day Sima took a large amount of soldiers to attack a city guarded by Zhuge. At that time most Zhuge’s soldiers were sent to transport food which was needed by the army, and there were only few older or injured soldiers who stayed in the city. That situation was very urgent.
To Sima’s surprise, Some farmers who were pretended by zhuge’s soliders, opened the gate and sweeping the floor. Zhuge was sat on the towers and playing a musical instrument called guzheng. Sima couldn’t find any fluster from Zhuge’s musical rhythm. Sima believed that Zhuge used to be very a careful person, and Zhuge had done nothing but made himself in danger. He predicted that there were thousands of soldiers in or around this city, Maybe he had already been surrounded by Zhuge’s army. So, Sima commanded his army to give up attack and retreat as soon as possible. Because of Sima’s retreat, Zhuge got time to gather his army and reinforce the city.
This story have been talked for thousands of years, which is called “the strategy of an empty city”.
Thanks for reading this and correcting my writing mistakes

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