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Quarantine in Moscow Today I lose a job. But I’m not alone in this awful situation. Many people today suddenly to become out of a job. I perceive all what happened around me close to heart. I should change my attitude to things. I often try to get deeply knowledge about some object, for example –COVID 19. Now I worried that people’s behaviors in Russia so irresponsible. In response on new recommendation from Mayor of Moscow people answer that they have a lot of important task, and they must do them. They can’t understand, that Moscow’s hospital doesn’t have enough place for a lot of patients. People, also my friends sure that COVID-19 are the same like flu, and only people with a weak immune system suffer from this virus. May be this opinion is annoying me because of I have a chronic disease – allergies with cough. Last two month I had time for reading news from Chines, Italy, New York. May be that’s why I understand something. Who is sure that he has strong immune system? People, who now travelling through country to Crimea and South region of Russia, they didn’t read about situation in Chine. They don’t know, that they can spread a virus through all country. When president declared that further weak is vacation (he didn’t declared a quarantine), people from all country decided to buy ticket to Sochi or Crimea. In this place for one week gathered all country. It is nightmare! I want that situation as soon as possible change for the better, I hope that our people will aware of the complexity and dangerous of situation, our future is depends on us and our government. I believe that our mayor will handle outbreaks.

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Quarantine in Moscow

Today I lost my lose a job, but I’m not alone in this awful situation. Many people have lost their jobs today.today suddenly to become out of a job.
I understand and have taken to heart everything that is happening around me.I perceive all what happened around me close to heart. I should change my attitude to things.
I often try to really understand some things get deeply knowledge about some object, for example –COVID 19. Now I am worried that people’s behaviors in Russia is so irresponsible. In response to a on new recommendation from the Mayor of Moscow, people answer that they have a lot of important work task, and they must/have to do it them.
They can’t understand, that Moscow’s hospitals don't doesn’t have enough beds place for a lot of patients.
People, also including my friends, are sure that COVID-19 is are the same as like flu, and that only people with a weak immune system will suffer from this virus. Maybe this opinion annoys is annoying me because of I have a chronic disease – allergies and a with cough.
Over the last two months I have had time to read the for reading news from China, Italy, and New York. Maybe that’s why I understand more something. Who can be is sure that he has a strong immune system? People, who are now travelling through the country to Crimea and the southern regions of Russia, haven't they didn’t read about the situation in China. They don’t know, that they could can spread a this virus throughout the all country. When the president declared that a further week is for vacation/a shutdown (he didn’t declared a lock down quarantine), people from all over the country decided to buy tickets to Sochi or Crimea. There will be many people there. In this place for one week gathered all country. It is nightmare!
I want this that situation to change for the better as soon as possible change for the better, I hope that our people will become aware of the complexity and dangerous of this situation, our future is depends on us and our government. I believe that our mayor will have to handle resistance. outbreaks.
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I am sorry to hear that many Russians don't care about the danger of this pandemic. However, the Russian Government should enforce the recommendations/ instructions of the health bodies. the sooner you tackle the issue the easier you can solve it. Further, comprehensive awareness campaigns have to be launched to understand the seriousness of the current situation and to minimize the threats of the corona virus.
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Quarantine in Moscow

Today I lost a my job. But, I’m not alone in this awful situation. Many people today have suddenly to become found themselves out of a job.
I perceive all what which happens around me close to my heart. I should change my attitude towards things.
I often try to get deeply knowledgeable about a certain topic some object, for example –COVID 19. Now I am worried that people’s behaviors in Russia are so irresponsible. In response on to the new recommendation from the Mayor of Moscow, people answer that they have a lot of important tasks, and that they must do them.
They can’t understand, that Moscow’s hospital doesn’t have enough place room for a lot of patients.
People, also as well as my friends, are sure that COVID-19 are is the same like flu, and that only people with a weak immune system can suffer from this virus. Maybe this opinion is annoying to me because of I have a chronic disease – allergies with cough.
The last two months, I had time for to reading news from China, Italy, and New York. Maybe that’s why I am understanding something. Who is sure that he or she has a strong immune system? People, who now travelling through the country to Crimea and the South region of Russia, they didn’t read about situation in China. They don’t know, that they can spread a virus throughout all the entire country. When the president declared that an further extra weak is of vacation (he didn’t declared a quarantine), people from all over the country decided to buy a ticket to Sochi or Crimea. In this place, for one week, gathered the entire all country. It is was a nightmare!
I want theat situation as soon as possible to change for the better as soon as possible, and I hope that our people will be aware of the complexity and dangerous of situation. Our future is depends on us and on our government. I believe that our mayor will handle the outbreaks well.

Good text - really like your ideas. I understand your frustrations! Remember to use more the articles and to make the right use of prepositions and verb conjugations in your text. Using the present simple, the past simple, and the future simple for the most part will make the text easier to write. Thanks!
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Quarantine in Moscow

Today I lost a job, but I’m not alone in this awful situation. Many people today suddenly lost their jobs.
I take everything that happens to heart and should change my attitude. I often try to get a deep understanding about things. For example, COVID-19. Now, I worried that people’s behaviour in Russia is irresponsible. In response to the new recommendations by the Mayor of Moscow, people said that they have many important tasks to complete which they must do.
They don’t understand that Moscow’s hospitals don’t have enough place for a lot of patients.
People, including my friends, think that COVID-19 is the same as the flu, and that only people with weak immune systems are at danger from this virus. Maybe this attitude is what is annoying me because, in addition to my chronic allergies and cough.
Over the last two months I have been reading news from China, Italy and New York. Maybe that’s why I understand much more than others. Who can be sure that they have a strong immune system? People travelling through the country to Crimea and southern Russia haven't heard/read about situation in China. They don’t know that they can spread a virus throughout the whole country. When the president declared a further week's vacation (he didn’t declared a quarantine), people from all over the country decided to buy tickets to Sochi and Crimea. There, everyone gathered for one week. It is nightmare!
I want that situation to change for the better as soon as possible. I hope that our people will become aware of the complexity and danger of the situation. Our future is depends on us and our government and I believe that our Mayor will be able to handle the outbreaks successfully.

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