Why I am taking this extra course
Being a current undergraduate student in Architecture and Urbanism at USP, I believe it is important to understand how urban life works.
In the future, I would like to work with urban planning. I intend to create sustainable and comfortable places. In this way, cities can become more pleasant than they are today.
To achieve my plans, it is necessary to cross all the features of urban life.
This course is a great opportunity to explore the cities around the world and conceive the role that I will have as architect and urban planner in society.
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Why I am taking this extra course
As an undergraduate of Architecture and Urbanism at USP, I believe it is important to understand how urban life works.
In the future, I would like to work in urban planning to create sustainable and comfortable places. In this way, cities can become more pleasant than they are today.
To achieve my goal, it is necessary to familiarise myself with all facets of urban life.
This course is a great opportunity to explore cities around the world and get a taste of the role of an architect and urban planner in a global society.
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Why I am taking this extra course
Being a current undergraduate student in Architecture and Urbanism at USP, I believe it is important to understand how urban life works.
In the future, I would like to work in with urban planning. I intend to create sustainable and comfortable places. In this way, cities can become more pleasant than they are today.
To achieve my plans, it is necessary to cross coordinate/include all the facets features of urban life.
This course is a great opportunity to explore the cities around the world and conceive the role that I will have as architect and urban planner in society.
I only have a few minor edits. I'm not sure what you are trying to say with "cross" all features, so I made 2 possible guesses. Otherwise, it is written well.
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