mingming's notebook entry: Jul 04, 2010
I AM A CHINESE GIRL.I AM LIVING IN GUANGZHOU.THESE DAYS,I HAVE BEEN WOKING FOR TWO YEARS.
I LOVE TRAVELING.I WISH TO TOUCH THE CULTURE OF THE OTHER COUNTRIES ,I CAN MAKE FRIENDS WITH OTHERS WHO FROM DIFFERENT COUNTRY AS WELL.
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mingming's notebook entry: Jul 04, 2010
I am a chinese girl. I am living in Guangzhou. These days, I have been woking for two years.
I love traveling and I wish to touch the culture of the other countries. I can would also like to make friends with others who from different country as well.
Hi Mingming,
There are no grammar errors in your sentence. But it is better to write English in lower case letters, capitalize the proper names, "I" and the first word in each sentence. Also leave a space after the period (".") The changes I made will help to make it sound a little nice.
BTW, Welcome to italki, 很高兴认识你
Hi Mingming,
There are no grammar errors in your sentence. But it is better to write English in lower case letters, capitalize the proper names, "I" and the first word in each sentence. Also leave a space after the period (".") The changes I made will help to make it sound a little nice.
BTW, Welcome to italki, 很高兴认识你
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