Short business email
Hi xxx,
***WHICH IS BETTER:
I have attached photos of my xxx, xxx, and xxx. This is in addition to the ones i sent last xxx.
***OR
In addition to the files I sent last xxx, i have attached the following:
1. xxx
2. xxx
3. Xxx
***WHICH IS BETTER:
As you know, aaa and bbb are now temporarily closed so the releasing of documents are postponed so I'm sending xxx for now.
***OR
I wasnt able to claim the aaa since they are temporarily suspending operations. Its the same case with my bbb as well.
As for the xxx and xxx, I and the co-maker have already signed it but it still needs to be notarized ***OR i still need to bring it to the notary.
Please let me know if you have any concerns. Thank you
Regards,
Xxx
*******Please help me make this email sound natural and professional. Better phrasing suggestions are also appreciated. Thank you.
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"As for the xxx and xxx, I and the co-maker have already signed it but it still needs to be notarized ***OR i still need to bring it to the notary."
"As for the xxx and xxx, I and my co-worker have already signed it but it still needs to be notarized."
I don't know what you are trying to say by using the word "co-maker". If you could explain it a little more, I can help you.
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From google:
co-maker. Person who, with other individual(s), guarantees a financial commitment (such as repayment of a loan). He or she is jointly and severally liable, with the other signatories (co-makers), for honoring the commitment in full. Also called co-guarantor.
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*Co-maker is an actual word used in our document. It's another person aside from me who needs to sign the document.
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