I made up several sentences. Could you please check them?
1. He took a long deep breath looking at that unbelievable castle surrounded old trees as if someone long since put a spell on it.
2. You know, you look sluggish today. If you feel unwell I can give you a spell (rest?) for several hours.
3. For a moment I slacked my pace greeting my friend on the other side of the street.
-These last sentences have already been checked but I have a doubt that everything is correct. Please, fix it one more time:
4. Bright sun, snow, a light melody heard from afar. Straightening, Kate stepped forward and slide over the sparkling ice. Now she herself looked like a snowflake swirling in the frosty air.
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I made up several sentences. Could you please check them?
1. He took a long, deep breath looking at that unbelievable castle surrounded by old trees as if someone long ago since had put a spell on it.
2. You know, you look sluggish today. If you feel unwell I can give you a spell (rest?) for several hours.
3. For a moment I slackened my pace, greeting my friend on the other side of the street.
-These last sentences have already been checked but I have a doubt that everything is correct. Please, fix it one more time:
4. Bright sun, snow, a light melody heard from afar. Straightening, Kate stepped forward and slide over the sparkling ice. Now she herself looked like a snowflake swirling in the frosty air.
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I made up several sentences. Could you please check them?
1. He took a long, deep breath looking at that unbelievable castle surrounded by old trees as if someone had long since ago put a spell on it.
2. You know, you look sluggish today. If you feel unwell I can give you a spell (rest?) let you rest for a while. several hours.
3. For a moment I slacked slackened my pace greeting to greet my friend on the other side of the street.
-These last sentences have already been checked, but I have a doubt that everything is correct. Please, fix it one more time:
4. Bright sun, snow, a light melody heard from afar. Straightening, Kate stepped forward and slide slid over the sparkling ice. Now she herself looked like a snowflake swirling in the frosty air.
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Number 4 is lovely and rather poetic!
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I made up several sentences. Could you please check them?
1. He took a long deep breath looking at that unbelievable castle surrounded by old trees as if someone long since had put a spell on it.
2. You know, you look sluggish today. If you feel unwell, I can give you a spell (rest?) for several hours you can rest for a few hours.
3. For a moment I slacked slowed down my pace greeting my friend on the other side of the street.
-These last sentences have already been checked but I have a doubt that everything is correct. Please, fix it one more time:
4. Bright sun, snow, a light melody heard from afar. Straightening, Kate stepped forward and slide over the sparkling ice. Now she herself looked like a snowflake swirling in the frosty air.
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