Dear diary
It's been a good day. I went to the street and printed the materials for the next English class. Twenty one copies cost fifteen yuan. It's a little expensive. And I'm lucky to learn Harry Potter with my Russian teacher tonight. She only accepts Russian students later. But she said I can book her lessons all the time. I have learned a lot of new words from Harry Potter, hang in there.I would like teachers from Pakistan and Iran to teach me Harry Potter as well.
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Dear diary
It's been a good day. I went *to the street and printed the materials for the next English class. Twenty one copies cost fifteen yuan. It's a little expensive. And I'm lucky to learn Harry Potter with my Russian teacher tonight. She only accepts Russian students later, but she said I can book her lessons all the any time. I have learned a lot of new words from Harry Potter, *hang in there.I would like teachers from Pakistan and Iran to teach me Harry Potter as well.
*I think using "I went out" instead of "I went to the street" would sound more natural. So, "I went out [from home] and printed the materials for the next English class."
*This could be completely removed. But if you want to express your persistence, you could make it a single sentence. "I'm hanging in there!"
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