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The rest 9 wisdom thoughts 2. Every morning, when we wake up, we have twenty four completely new hours of our lives.Such a precious gift!!! We have the potential to live this day in the way, so these twenty four hours bring peace, joy anf happiness to ourselves and to other people. 3. To be beautiful means to be yourself. And for this there is no need that others accept and recognize you. There is need you eccept yourself. 4. Live in the way, that you never lose yourself . What it means? When worries, fears, wishes and enger seize you, you start to run away form yourself and lose yourslef. 5. We are what we feel and think. 6. Our life is piece of art. Even if we don't write poems and don't paint, anyway we create. 7. In order we could hear the beauty and respond to the call, quiet is needed. If we dont't feel stillness inside yourself, and our mind and body are full of noise, so we are not able to hear the voice of beauty. 8. If you like only the best qualities in a person - it isn't love. You should eccept his/her weaknesses, show patience and comprehension. 9. How much time we spend to get happiness and don't notice that our surrounding world is full of miracles. 10. To love means study the art to creat own happiness. PLEASE, CORRECT MISTAKES. THANK YOU IN ADVANCE!!

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It is an excellent writeup written with true emotions though academically required few changes.
I have marked them while while traveling, may be i overlooked a few. Keep it up.

The rest 9 wisdom thoughts

2. Every morning, when we wake up, we have twenty four completely new hours of our lives. Such a precious gift!!! We have the potential to live this day in
the a way, so these twenty four hours bring peace, joy anf happiness to ourselves and to other people.
3. To be beautiful means to be yourself. And for this there is no need that others accept and or recognize you. There is need you eccept accept yourself.
4. Live in the way, that you never lose yourself . What it means? When worries, fears, (wishes ?)and enger anger (seize?) you, you start to run away form yourself and lose yourslef.
5. We are what we feel and think.
6. Our life is piece of art. Even if we don't write poems and don't paint, anyway still we create.
7. In order we could to hear the beauty and respond to the call, quietness is needed. If we dont't feel stillness calmness inside yourself ourself, and our mind and body are full of noise, so then we are not able to hear the voice of beauty.
8. If you like only the best qualities in a person - it this isn't love. You should eccept accept his/her weaknesses, show patience and comprehension ( compassion is moe suitable).
9. How much time we spend to get seek happiness and but don't notice that our surrounding world is full of miracles.
10. To love means study the art to create own happiness.

PLEASE, CORRECT MISTAKES. THANK YOU IN ADVANCE!!
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The rest remaining 9 wisdom thoughts

2. Every morning, when we wake up, we have twenty four hours of our lives that are completely new. Such a precious gift!!! We have the potential to live this day in the such a way so that these twenty four hours bring peace, joy and happiness to ourselves and to other people.
3. To be beautiful means to be yourself. And for this there is no need that for others to accept and recognize you. There is only a need for you to accept yourself.
4. Live in the a way, that you never lose yourself. What does it means? When worries, fears, wishes and anger seize you, you start to run away from yourself and lose yourself.
5. We are what we feel and think.
6. Our life is a piece of art. Even if we don't write poems and don't paint, we anyway we create anyway.
7. In order that we can hear the beauty and respond to the call, quiet is needed. If we don't feel stillness inside yourself ourselves, and our mind and body are full of noise, so then we are not able to hear the voice of beauty.
8. If you like only the best qualities in a person - it isn't love. You should accept his/her weaknesses, show patience and comprehension.
9. How much time do we spend to get happiness, and don't notice that our surrounding world is full of miracles.
10. To love means to study the art to of creating our own happiness.

PLEASE, CORRECT MISTAKES. THANK YOU IN ADVANCE!!

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