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guilin I m a 16 year old girl ,and I come from China Guilin . you know , that guilin ,with the LiJiang river , Elephant moutains , anyway ,its a beautiful city . In the summer ,you can swimming in the LiJiang river , the water is very clear ,but the sun is very big , you should protect you skin . everynight ,you can take a walk on the ZhengYang street , there are some clothesshop and some snack shop , however ,in the night ,there is very funny.

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I m a 16 year old girl ,and I come from China Guilin .  Do You know that Guilin with the LiJiang river, and Elephant Mountain? Anyway, its a beautiful city .

In the summer ,you can go swimming in the LiJiang river.The water is very clear, but the sun is very big, intense, so you should protect you skin.

Everynight , you can take a walk on the ZhengYang street. There are some clothesshop clothing satores and some snack shops. However ,in the at night ,there is very funny. it is very funny.  (最后的句子,我不是很懂你的意思。)

 

 

 

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                                                 Guilin

I am a 16-year-old girl, and I come from Guilin, China. You know, that Guilin with the LiJiang River and Elephant Mountain. Anyway, it's a beautiful city.

In the summer, you can swimming in the LiJiang River. The water is very clear, but the sun is very big intense. You should protect your skin.

Every night, you can take a walk on the ZhengYang Street. There are some clothes shops and some snack shops; however, in the at night, there is very funny it is a little weird.

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