Annotation. I am writing a research paper, need some help. Thank you very much!!!
Keywords: chemical qualitative and quantitative analysis, modular training technology, proctor students.
Annotation: the article presents the experience of using modular training technology to perform various types of chemical analysis on extracurricular classes by students of the Pedagogical University with students of specialized classes of the Lyceum.
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Annotation. I am writing a research paper, need some help. Thank you very much!!!
Keywords: chemical qualitative and quantitative analysis, modular training technology, proctor students.
Annotation: the article presents the experience of using modular training technology to perform various types of chemical analysis on extracurricular classes by students of the Pedagogical University with students of specialized classes of the Lyceum.
Annotation: the article presents the experience of students of the Pedagogical University who used modular training technology to perform various types of chemical analysis in extracurricular classes. These specialist classes are attended by students from the Lyceum. (Lyceum - a specific school? Or 'high school, in general?)
This is very difficult :-) - perhaps you will receive better answers - this is my best attempt, not easy!
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I would like to ask some clarifying questions first that might help you in the future.
What type of citation style are you using for the paper (MLA, APA etc)?
Is this annotation about your own research paper?
If yes, then it may be actually an abstract: a summary of your own findings, while an annotation is more to evaluate the article as a source in a bibliography or to evaluate the findings as a standalone critique.
Here's a nifty link I found that explains it: https://library.piercecollege.edu/c.php?g=418583&p=2853282
Although I think the way you wrote is technically fine, I think rearranging the sentence structure can make it easier even for laypeople to read. As it is, it's unclear who is the doer, and who is the receiver. Since I'm a layperson, this is what your sentence means to me: In this article, a group of students (the Pedagogical University students) received a particular type of training that helped them perform various types of analyses. They completed these analyses on extracurricular classes, inside of these classes were "students of specialized classes" in the Lyceum. Is this what you intend readers to understand from your writing?
If that's the case, here are my suggestions:
Keywords: chemical qualitative and quantitative analysis, modular training technology, proctor students.
Abstract or Annotation: The article presents the experience of Pedagogical University students who using received modular training technology to perform various types of chemical analysis on extracurricular classes with students of specialized classes in the Lyceum. Now provide a short summary of the findings and it's application for the future (if this is about your research paper) or a short evaluation of the findings and how it connects to your research paper (if this is a source).
Let me know if you need any clarifications!
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