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He was a very excellent singer. His vocie was unique, and he sang song with feelings.
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He was an very excellent singer. His vocie voice was unique, and he sang song with feeling s.
As Matthew pointed out, you cannot say, "very excellent." While the text above is now grammatically correct, it gives the impression that the singer has already passed away or he is no longer an excellent singer. Is this what you wanted to say? If not, you need to change the tense as follows :
He is an excellent singer. He has a unique voice and he sang with feeling.
If he/she is a truly exceptional singer with a very special voice, but you can't find the words to describe it, you can maybe say—he has a voice from heaven. Or—she has a voice made in heaven. It is not very common, but that is how I like to describe few of my own favourite female singers ha! ha!.
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He was a superb singer. He had a unique voice and he sang with feeling.
He was a terrific singer. He had a unique voice and he sang with true emotion.
(Note: You can't say "very excellent" because "excellent" is a non-gradable adjective)
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He use to be a good singer and his voice quality is quite unique, also he sang song with feelings
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