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Pollution and damage to the environment is one of the biggest problems for each country nowadays.
As some scientists say, transport is one of the reasons of the climate change. Most of the vehicles throw dangerous gas into the atmosphere of the Earth. This pollution makes a really huge damage and nobody knows exactly if our grandchildren will have a place to live. Some countries try to solve this problem, some prefer to ignore as it doesn’t exist. But could we stop this terrifying process? Surely we can use transport less than we do it now, some could ride bikes instead of having their own cars, rich people could refuse of using private planes, anyway these steps would be too little to stop the destruction of the planet. The only thing humans could do is begin using vehicles which wouldn’t damage our planet. Luckily, cars which need alternative fuel are already used in some countries and it would be great if these vehicles would spread worldwide.
Pollution of water is also a disaster. During the 20th century human destroyed many rivers and seas. People built dams which drained the rivers, threw lots of litter and waste into the seas and now the damage is as big as it’s impossible to return to the previous state.
One more problem is plastic. It decomposes during hundred of years. And I think this problem could be solved by prohibition of plastic. And I think the problem of pollution could be solved only if the countries will fight together.
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Pollution and damage to the environment is one of the biggest problems for each country nowadays.
As some scientists say, transport is one of the reasons of the climate change. Most of the vehicles Many vehicles (simpler) throw dangerous gases into the atmosphere of the Earth. This pollution makes a is really huge damaging and nobody knows exactly if our grandchildren will have a place to live. Some countries try to solve this problem, some prefer to ignore as if it doesn’t exist. But can we stop this terrifying process? Surely we can use transport less than we do it now. Some could ride bikes instead of having their own cars, rich people could refuse of using to use private planes. Anyway these steps wouldn't be too little do much to stop the destruction of the planet. The only thing humans we can do is begin to start using vehicles which wouldn’t damage our planet. Luckily, cars which need alternative fuel are already being used in some countries and it would be great if these vehicles would spread worldwide.
Pollution of water is also a disaster. During the 20th century human we destroyed many rivers and seas. People built dams which drained the rivers, threw lots of litter and waste into the seas and now the damage is as too big (great [more dramatic]) as and it’s impossible to return to the previous state.
One more problem is plastic. It decomposes during after hundred of years. And I think this problem could be solved by prohibiting the use of plastic. And I think the problem of pollution ccan only be solved only if the countries will fight (work [I think this is better]) together.
Great job Daria!
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