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A village that looks like something out of a fairy tale. I’ll never forget my backpacking holiday to Asturias, in the north of Spain. It was the first trip that I took with my boyfriend so I couldn’t have been more excited. We booked a cottage located in the breathtaking scenery of the mountains of Cangas de Narcea, which I had never seen before. What’s more, the accommodation and the facilities were convenient so it was worth paying. We spent a couple of days sightseeing, looking around some peaceful places and also we had lunch in luxurious restaurants. The thing I loved most was the adrenaline rush when we practiced adventure sports such as canoeing in the Sena river or rock climbing in the peaks of Europe. Moreover, I noticed how friendly and cheerful local people were. They suggested getting off the beaten track. What an amazing experience! I have been back to Asturias several times since I consider it a paradise for when I’ m retired.

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A village that looks like something out of a fairy tale.

I’ll never forget my backpacking holiday to Asturias, in the north of Spain. It was the first trip that I took with my boyfriend so I couldn’t have been more excited.

We booked a cottage located in the breathtaking scenery of the mountains of Cangas de Narcea, which I had never seen before. What’s more, the accommodation and the facilities were convenient so it was worth paying extra. [Alternative: What’s more, the accommodation and the facilities were convenient so it was worth the price]

We spent a couple of days sightseeing, looking around some peaceful places and also we had lunch in luxurious restaurants. [Technically correct but awkward phrasing. Another option: We spent a couple of days sightseeing at some peaceful places, and we also had lunch in luxurious restaurants)

The thing I loved most was the adrenaline rush when we tried adventure sports like canoeing in the Sena river and rock climbing in the peaks of Europe. [and instead of or because you did both!]

Moreover, I noticed how friendly and cheerful local people were. They suggested getting off the beaten track. What an amazing experience! I have been back to Asturias several times since I consider it a paradise that will be perfect to live in when I’m retired.

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