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I never thought! I never thought a new my research target had appeared just before graduation! The novel virus is called SARS-CoV-2 now and the infection is called COVID-19. In fact, I have been studied coronaviruses in my current graduate school but it was minor research until last Dec. Though SARS-CoV and MERS-CoV have been paid attention so far to some extent, a few laboratories researching coronavirus are in Japan. Even in the annual meeting of Japanese Society of Virology, a session on coronavirus was shrinking. Japan had evaded viral infections invading such as Ebola, MERS. So the measure against various infections had not been taken care of on a large scale and now, the government is upset. I hope a estblishment of large organization like CDC, taking the opportunity.

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I never thought!

I never thought my new research target would appeared just before graduation! The novel virus is called SARS-CoV-2 now and the infection is called COVID-19. In fact, I have been studying coronaviruses in my current graduate school but it was minor research until last Dec. Though so far SARS-CoV and MERS-CoV have to some extent been paid attention to, only a few laboratories researching coronavirus are in Japan. Even in the annual meeting of The Japanese Society of Virology, the session on coronavirus was shrinking. Japan had evaded viral infections invading other countries such as Ebola and MERS. So the measures against various infections had not been taken care of on a large scale, and now, the government is upset. I hope a estblishment of large organization like the CDC, takes this opportunity to step in.

I did not understand your last sentence, as the "opportunity" wasn't clear. I added what I thought were the missing words. I also corrected this as if it were speech and not writing - the way you write sounds like the way people talk rather than like an essay. I hope that is ok! :)
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  1. I never thought a new my research target had appeared just before graduation!
  2. I never thought that my new research target would appear just before graduation!
  3. The novel virus is called SARS-CoV-2 now and the infection is called COVID-19.
  4. The novel virus, called SARS-CoV-2, causes the infection COVID-19.
  5. In fact, I have been studied coronaviruses in my current graduate school but it was minor research until last Dec.
  6. You can delete "in fact."
  7. Currently, I am studying coronaviruses at graduate school, although it has only been minor research up until last December.
  8. Although "current graduate school" is a grammatically correct phrase, it is more natural to move "current" to the beginning of the sentence. This makes the sentences flow smoother.
  9. "Has only" puts more emphasis on "minor research."
  10. Though SARS-CoV and MERS-CoV have been paid attention so far to some extent, a few laboratories researching coronavirus are in Japan.
  11. Even though SARS-Cov and MERS-CoV have been given attention to some extent, few laboratories are researching coronavirus in Japan.
  12. It sounds more natural when you reword it.
  13. Even in the annual meeting of Japanese Society of Virology, a session on coronavirus was shrinking.
  14. During the annual meeting of the Japanese Society of Virology, the session on coronavirus was not given adequate attention. (I am not sure what you mean by shrinking. Can you type what you meant in Japanese please?)
  15. Japan had evaded viral infections invading such as Ebola, MERS.
  16. Up until now, Japan has evaded viral infections such as Ebola and MERS.
  17. So the measure against various infections had not been taken care of on a large scale and now, the government is upset.
  18. Delete "so." We don't need to start sentences with "so."
  19. Measures against various infections have not been dealt with on a large scale, causing the government to be upset.
  20. I hope a estblishment of large organization like CDC, taking the opportunity.
  21. I hope large organizations, such as the CDC, will take this as an opportunity to protect citizens.

Overall, very good job! I am also very interested in the current COVID-19 virus. Be safe and take care of yourself! (If you are interested in taking lessons with me, please check out my page. Thank you very much!)
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Yama-San Thank you for giving questions. I think that some of the coronaviruses have seasons, depending on the weather. In the winter of Japan, the humidity is lower than in other seasons and the air dry is critical for respiratory infections like flu and respiratory corona. So, we should pay attention to whether it becomes a seasonal infection at least in Japan or other countries with similar weather to Japan. And I see this virus characteristics as a problem. The virus causes asymptomatic in humans or animals. That means a difficulty to detect it and a possibility of invisible circulation in humans and animals. In virtue of those reasons, I concern this virus widespread and become common. We should have been researching coronaviruses for future epidemics as well as China has been doing. It' s just an opinion. I have to study more because I am far from a specialist!
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Just a thought: An alternative final sentence to "correction 1". I hope that Japan takes this opportunity to establish a large organization like CDC. I am guessing that that is what you meant. Hmmmh. Do you take questions? Do coronaviruses have seasons, like influenza? In other words, could the cases in the Northern Hemisphere start dropping as we move into Spring?

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