Notebook Entry 0024 - Sunrise
Hopefully this isn’t too bad…. Thank you for the corrections.
毎朝、私は早く起きて、仕事に行きます。今、製油所がある東の家で働いています。製油所へ運転しながら、日が昇るのを見られます。時々朝日を特別にきれいです。たくさん交通があっても、私は日が昇るのを見ているを嬉しくなってきた。皆は日が昇るのを見ながら、毎日を始めるといいです。
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 4
2
Notebook Entry 0024 - Sunrise
Hopefully this isn’t too bad…. Thank you for the corrections.
毎朝、(私は)早く起きて、仕事に行きます。今、製油所の東にある家（オフィス/職場）で働いています。
Do you mean "家" as your workplace? If you are a member of a company and you commute there, オフィス（Office）or 職場(workplace) is good here.
製油所へ運転しながら、日が昇るのを見られます。
Grammatically, Good! I am writing a example for more natural expression.
製油所に車で向かっていると、日の出（日が昇ること）が見られます
時々朝日が特別(に)きれいです。
No problem but I correct a little. You need not to remove "に" but you can emphasize beautiful scene.
we do not express like this. ”道が混む” is used often.
皆も日が昇るのを見ながら、毎日を始めるといいですよ。
Because you recommend people your habit, "も" is good. And finishing this sentence with "よ" make it gentle recommendation.
Please let me know easily if you have some questions for this correction. My English is not good and there might be some explanations difficult to understand.
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
