Dear diary
It’s a sunny day. How a lucky girl I was, cuz my mom working in a restaurant and there are some facial masks she can bring to our home, so I didn’t need to spend too much money to buy facial masks. A man wanted to buy some facial masks for me, yet my mom refused. Maybe she’s right, having money couldn’t buy facial masks at this period. My mom and I was angry about that my relatives asked us to give her some facial masks yet didn’t say thank you and didn’t give us money, we gave her facial masks by bus, however she didn’t give us anything. We will never give her a mask again!
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Just a few small corrections: use because instead of cuz, it is more formal. Capitalize the word bus if it is the name of a brand. If you would like some help with English writing, I am a native English speaker and a community tutor. Message me and we can discuss your learning goals. It is should be from instead of for me. Use were instead of was. Face would sound better than facial. Add is in front of working.
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Dear diary
It’s a sunny day. What a lucky girl I was, cuz my mom is working in a restaurant and there are some face masks she can bring to our home, so I didn’t need to spend too much money to buy face masks. A man wanted to buy some face masks for me [from me??], yet my mom refused. Maybe she’s right, having money couldn’t buy face masks at the moment. My mom and I were angry that my relatives asked us to give them some face masks yet didn’t say thank you and didn’t give us money, we gave her face masks by bus, however she didn’t give us anything. We will never give her a mask again!
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