Are my sentences natural? Zero-error？
1. budding：
Business schools aim to train budding entrepreneurs.
2. pose no risk to:
Educationists claim that puppy love poses no risk to children’s academic performance, instead it could have a positive effect.
3. duped into studying :
Many women from Indonesia duped into working as maids in Saudi Arabia, struggle to pay a return ticket to their home country, as their employers confiscate their passports but not pay them anything.
4. windfall
造句：It seems everyone has the dream of gaining a windfall one day, such as winning a lottery.
5. well-off
Education equality is unachievable to a large degree as pupils from well-off and underprivileged families never compete on a level playing field.
6.indiscriminate：
Even though some history might be biased and partial, we shouldn't reject all history indiscriminately.
7.threshold：
Adolescents are on the threshold of adulthood with both confusion and yearning.
8. be impoverished by
That old professor is impoverished by his ex-wife, who runs away with a French chef！
9. frees… to take risks
Government’s tax cuts free small and medium businesses to take risks of going bankrupt.
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Are my sentences natural? Zero-error？
1. budding：
Business schools aim to train budding entrepreneurs.
2. pose no risk to:
Educationists claim that puppy love poses no risk to children’s academic performance, instead it could have a positive effect.
3. duped into studying :
Many women from Indonesia, duped into working as maids in Saudi Arabia, struggle to pay for a return ticket to their home country, as their employers confiscate their passports but and do not pay them anything.
4. windfall
造句：It seems everyone has the dream (a dream) of gaining a windfall one day, such as winning a lottery (the lottery). (more common way in blue but still fine as is. 'as is' = 'as it is' )
5. well-off
Education equality is unachievable to a large degree as pupils from well-off and underprivileged families never compete on a level playing field.
6.indiscriminate：
Even though some history might be biased and partial, we shouldn't reject all history indiscriminately.
7.threshold：
Adolescents are on the threshold of adulthood with both in confusion and in yearning.
8. be impoverished by
That old professor is (was) impoverished by his ex-wife, who runs (ran) away with a French chef！(in blue, my preferred tense for this, more natural IMO)
9. frees… to take risks
Government’s tax cuts free small and medium businesses to take risks from the risk of going bankrupt.
If you must say to take risks :
Government’s tax cuts free small and medium businesses to take risks such as investing more and employing additional staff .
All good quality sentences. #9 is incorrect as is.
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Additional to Greg's corrections:
5. well-off
Education equality is unachievable to a large degree, as pupils from well-off and underprivileged families never compete on a level playing-field.
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woody，你别给我改了哈。删掉哈。影响别人给我改。
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sorry
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