A story: A walk in the park
Sue was walking in the park, when something unusual happened. It was a beautiful sunny day in the middle of the summer. The sun was shining, and Sue felt happy because she had a good mood. At that time, she was about 16, and she was a lovely shy girl with a pleasant smile and curly hair. That day she was wearing a nice blue skirt, a white blouse and a big round red hat. There wasn't any wind in the park but suddenly the storm came and blew her beautiful fashionable hat. She ran after it, but suddenly she saw a handsome man with a beautiful smile and bright blue eyes who was holding her hat.
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A Walk In The Park, A Short Story
Sue was walking in the park, when something unusual happened. It was a beautiful sunny day in the middle of the summer. The sun was shining, and Sue felt happy because she was in a good mood. At that time, she was about 16, and she was a lovely shy girl with a pleasant smile and curly hair. That day she was wearing a nice blue skirt, a white blouse and a big round red hat. There wasn't any wind in the park but suddenly a storm came and blew her beautiful fashionable hat. She ran after it, and suddenly she saw a handsome man with a beautiful smile and bright blue eyes who was holding her hat. (to be continued)
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A lovely story. Will u continue writting this story?
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