My husband and I went to Hokkaido by airplane to take pictures of steam locomotives from February 21
My husband and I went to Hokkaido by airplane to take pictures of steam locomotives from February 21 to February 25.
On the first day I left home at 11:00 o’clock in the morning. I ate a glass of beer and lots of snack in the lounge at the Chubu international airport. It was our lunch. We arrived at Hokkaido at 5 o’clock in the evening. It was not so much snow in the road. We drove to the Lake Akan by rental car. Our rental car was old compact car “Nissan Note” that ran 130000 km. It is uncomfortable for us to drive in a snowy road. Because There are not many grooves on studless winter tire. We checked in the hotel at 7:00 at night. We ate a soup curry for dinner. It was yummy. Next we went to fireworks festival. It was only 10 minutes but it’s really fantastic time to see an amazing colorful fireworks. It was a nice day
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My husband and I went to Hokkaido by airplane to take pictures of steam locomotives from February 21
My husband and I went to Hokkaido by airplane to take pictures of steam locomotives from February 21 to February 25. On the first day I left home at 11:00 o’clock in the morning. For lunch, I drank a glass of beer and ate lots of snacks in the Chubu International Airport lounge. You could also say "I had a glass of beer and a lot of snacks in the Chubu international airport lounge." In English, sometimes we just say "had" which covers both eating/drinking in this situation.
We arrived in Hokkaido at 5 o’clock in the evening. There was not much snow on the road. We drove to the Lake Akan by rental car. Our rental car was an old compact car “Nissan Note” that ran 130000 km. It was uncomfortable for us to drive on a snowy road because there were not many grooves on the studless winter tires. We checked into the hotel at 7:00 at night. We ate a soup curry for dinner. It was yummy. After dinner, we went to a fireworks festival. It was only 10 minutes but it was really fantastic to see such amazing and colorful fireworks. It was a nice day.
There may still be some sentences that are not completely natural. However, I tried to provide corrections using the same overall sentence format you used.
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