Overcome your fear
Nobody agreet with me when I said I want to go travelling in india alone. But I sitll insist ,because I want to go ,I don't afraid what difficult that will meet .just I know it will be inprove my independent ability and also can bring more confident to me .Even if it's the first time I go to abroad alone. but I think I have ready,because if you want to go ahead ,you must overcome your fear ,so just following your heart ,just do it .I believe it will be a wonderfull travel.
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Overcome your fear
Nobody agreet agreed with me when I said I want to go travelling in India alone. But I sitll insisted because I want to go. I don't want to be afraid of what difficulties that I will meet. I just I know it will be inprove improve my independence ability, and also can bring more confidence to me, even if it's the first time I go to abroad alone. but I think I have am ready, because if you want to go ahead, you must overcome your fear. so Just following your heart, just do it. I believe it will be a wonderfull travel.
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Notes
I hope you don't mind my corrections, you did a good job telling your story. It is comprehensible and gets the main theme acrossed. I understood what you were trying to say 100%, I commend you on your efforts.
One common, small mistake I see throughout your writing is the confusion of your punctuation. No worries though, you'll easily be able to correct it. From now on, place your period at the end of a sentence and then insert a space. The same thing with comas, after a coma, leave a space.
For example:
mistakes
"But I sitll insist ,because I want to go ,I don't afraid what difficult that will meet .just I know it will be
inprove my independent ability and also can bring more confident to me ."
correction
But I still insist, because I want to go. I don't want to be afraid of what difficulties that I will meet, I just know it will improve my independence and confidence.
So remember! 💡💡💡
a sentence should flow like this:
word -> period -> space
word -> coma -> space
a sentence DOES NOT flow like this:
word -> space -> period
word -> space -> coma
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Conclusion
Overall, no matter what language you would have told this story in, it is very beautiful. It is inspirational and I can see it being used by youth and elders all the same, it's a lesson everyone can learn from. You should be proud for being so brave and I thank you for sharing your story. We are all learning, and we are all teaching. Thank you for teaching me bravery. If you have any questions please feel free to ask!
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Overcome your fear
Nobody agreed with me when I said I want to go travelling in India alone. But I still insisted because I want to go ,I don't afraid what difficult that will meet (no idea what you're trying to say here). Only that I know it will improve my ability to be more independent and also make me more confident. Even if it's the first time that I go abroad alone, I think I am ready. If you want to move forward, you must overcome your fear. Simply follow your heart and just do it. I believe it will be a wonderful experience.
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